Before its All Over and Done With You Shall Feel Me

Drag me to hell
So I can fuck the devil up
Piss in the lake of fire
And put to rest the demons that keep me up
Implant my words in there skulls
And watch them detonate
And make it look like their necks are throwing up
Always putting in
Never given up
My father taught me that
Even though he was never in my life
He taught me to be a man
Without him even stepping foot in my circle of life
My circle of life
Is hula hooping around misery
And its trying to elevate
Trying to cum up by itself like to be masturbating
Split ends
Head aching
Violence of violins
Strumming madly in one’s head
My life ain’t no fairy tale
It ain’t going to end with no happily ever after
Take one good look at it
Fuck can’t you tell
But believe before the end
I’m going leave some good chapters
So just suit me up in a strap jacket
Let me go insane
Sick in the head
Till where my brain is shitting through my mouth
And every word that shits out
Gets to you
Spreading this viral infection
Sticking it to you like a hard erection
So that you can feel me

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Don’t worry lol I’m okay….I just felt like writing something raw and explosive…..i wrote this sometime earlier this week (sept 29 2009)
lol enjoy ….


  • Christie  Moses
    Christie Mosesover 5 years ago

    Holy hell! this is hard hitting and I could feel it like a punch in the gut. You rock :) I can almost guarantee that your voice will live on long after you are gone. You are to talented for it not to :) xoxo

  • awww thats a wonderful thing to say …got me over hear feeling vigorated and ready to write some more …thank you …and you shall be immortal by your words as well…smilez

    – colorblind

  • Erika .
    Erika .over 5 years ago

    Violence of violins
    Strumming madly in one’s head
    My life ain’t no fairy tale
    It ain’t going to end with no happily ever after…you just inspired me to write something. Powerful words Daz….this feels like it burns in your guts.

  • it burns through pores of body a molten sun sitting in my soul….smilez…i’m good though
    thank you and little ol me inspired you really lovely …truly lovely
    hope to see the outcome…daz

    – colorblind

  • u ever wrote that piece
    i would love to see it …yours truly daz

    – colorblind

  • RaOrEmraeh
    RaOrEmraehover 5 years ago

    Slam dunk! Geeze… It’s incredible. I like seeing all side of you through your creativity.

  • truly well said…i thought i was getting to mushy mushy lol…so i had to change things around …kind of like my room …after a while i like to rearrange things….thank truly cass i’m glad you like this one….for your work is marvelous…thumbs up to you

    – colorblind

  • SanjaXOXO
    SanjaXOXOover 5 years ago

    Ok…if you’re gonna piss in the lake of fire….just be careful not to burn your goods (aight!!) lol….this is raw….edgy…and as Cassify said…a SLAM DUNK!! XOXO

  • Never that ….lol can’t allow that to happen ….i want to one day have mini-me’s running around lol….but thank you Sanja xoxoxoxo… that you love the impact of my slam dunk ….smilez and thank you again

    – colorblind

  • Ty Beach
    Ty Beachover 5 years ago

    very powerful…

  • thank you Ty ….thanks chik …smilez …you kno …lol

    – colorblind

  • pagan
    paganover 5 years ago

    yo! i feel you here… as a writer i think we all have these explosive moments, like there’s so much emotion we’re trying to express you wish you could morph it into something physical to strike with. but as artists, we’ve got different ways – as writers we’ve got words. and you sure know how to use them! great work!

  • awwwwww i like this commment alots…thumbs up to you gretchen
    glad to have you pass on it
    here you deserve this for your wonderful comment

    – colorblind

  • JaneSolomon
    JaneSolomonover 5 years ago

    love this fiery explosion cb….felt ya. x

  • i had to let it loose …..its good way of venting out ….truly glad you still liked it Jane ….yours truly daz…xoxoxo ….from the heart you kno its real

    – colorblind

  • Johemia
    Johemiaover 5 years ago

    Striking words, ‘My circle of life
    Is hula hooping around misery’. I love that line and your ending really hits home.

    The last line is so powerful after those hard hitting words that came before. Twisting the frustration into a sweet silent sort of plea. Love it.

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