She Lives in My Head
I’ve been just thinking of my girlfriend alot lately ….and indugling in pools of memories
I hope things look good for us….I want there to be a us….
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Tuning out
To tune in
...into…
A daydream
Mental masturbation
As a replay the images of me and her
Or just the image of her
Dancing in my head
Like a butterfly encased in a jar
She flutters
And tickles my thoughts
I lose my mind
It ejaculates
And I catch the splashes of it
On a piece of loose leaf
And I frame it
Because when I squint my eyes
I see … our future
Yes … our future
And by our
I mean me and her
The splashes of my mind
Are the spills of my dreams
And she is the butterfly
That feasts on the spills of my dreams
The sweet nectar
That keeps her thriving
And doing aerial donuts
Encased in the confinements of my head
In the fields
Of where my dreams bloom and blossom
and where she
....lives….
Nascha
Enchanting my sweet friend. xxx
Nascha
If she lives in your head angel….she couldn’t be closer…..xxxx
colorblind replied
thank you dear Jane …smilez…. i can’t to recite my new works to her…she means the world to me…thank you from daz xoxoxoxo
Trenchtownrock
It ejaculates
And I catch the splashes of it
On a piece of loose leaf
And I frame it …such an amazing line and the entire verse just kick ass with beauty..one love homie.
colorblind replied
I like that you love the kung fu dancing of those lines… i tried to work something up that would bring a chop to my family who is yall my family here on the bubble…thanks homie truly ..daz
Shelly Hiebert
You have an amazing way with words Daz…...keep mentally masturbating :)
colorblind replied
i will and continue to catch the aftermath and framing it …smilez..thank you shellz….daz
Mari1980
Wonderful imagery !!
—mari
colorblind replied
Thank you Mari….glad you like and love the imagery…daz
wigs
lovely writing with great imagery
colorblind replied
thank you i love that you love it …smilez
ricardo perez jr
dats tough man ! i kno wut dat is yo i kno but gtta keep rollin big dogg. nev3r kno what the future holds ,yur hmi3 rick
colorblind replied
yea man you right ….things are looking up ….i i everyday i wake up i wonder if its that day ….hopefully tomorrow will be so
Georgette
This is a beautifully written piece.
colorblind replied
thank you glad you like truly yours colorblind
Carlie Hensley
What a lucky Lady,this is beautiful!
colorblind replied
lucky me…smilez….to have such a lady …i hope to have her back ….i love her so very much thank you for viewing and taking time to comment ….daz
Jascie Epinn
I indulge into a trance
Tuning out
To tune in
...into…
A daydream
Mental masturbation
wow that is so powerful, it’s a stinger. I like it.
colorblind replied
smilez …i’m glad you do….thats my ish right there …lol mental masturbation….blissful orgasmiac