....i'm dying for you

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Author: colorblind
Word Count: 207
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....i'm dying for you

Another piece to declare my love for my love …smilez
I must say I’m glad to have her in my life she inspires so many pieces
This came to me after days of not seeing her for a while ….I felt like a druggie.
- I fiend for her touch
- just to stare into her eyes
- to kiss her lips, back and etc….
- just to feel her words brush against me ….
- .....I fiend for her ….dying to have her

....i'm dying for you belongs to the following groups:

! Creative Writing & Poetry !, "Poetry and Beautiful Women" , All Around the Styles, All Out Emotion, All Things Poetic, Artistic, Philosophical, Core [C.O.R.E], Creative, Talented, and Unknown, Freedom In Words & Art, Live, Love, Dream: , On Youth, Shameless Self-Promotion, The beauty of poetry, The Healing Journey, Up & Coming Writers, Vibration in Art and Verse - VAVoom!, Who are YOU to Judge?, WMG, Woman Appreciation and Writing: Persuing Happiness

Beauty
Overdoses again
Like Marilyn
And runs through the webs of her veins like heroine
She is the fix I need
I’m spasming
And fuck replasing
For my heart is in critical condition
I need her now!
She is the medicine
The drug
The operation
The air needed for two hollow lungs
For respiration
She is the paint to bring to life this blank canvas
My life is on the line
And I need her to reel me in
For I’m live bait for the jaws of Death
And as I hang on the end of this line
Drowning in a sea of blood, sweat and spit
Only you can save me
You
Yes you
You with the face
That face that I’m oh so familiar with
That face that none of the angels gated in Heaven
Can compare to
I need you
My heart needs that speed
My stomach those butterflies
My eyes that injection
That your soul shoots from your eyes
That leaves me numb and paralyzed
Lost in a daze
Hypnotized
Flow life into me
Mouth to mouth
Let me taste your essence
For mines is fading
I need you
I fiend for you
Save me
I’m dying for you

  • SanjaXOXO

    SanjaXOXO

    Wow Dez….this is amazing!!! I LOVE that you are in LOVE!!! Keep em coming!! =)

  • colorblind replied

    Thank you Sanja …..Kisses n O Kisses n O xoxoxoxoxoxo …smilez…glad you like and i have more i just need for my poetry to get seen more for me to add more …. me being gone for awhile has left me went a huge disappearance of those who use to comment and view my work ….i hope they see that i’m back and view my work again …..thank you for your love …daz

  • Nascha

    Nascha

    Oh the ache, the ache…..I know this ache…..beautiful cb baby. xxx

  • colorblind replied

    awww thank you jane truly from the bottom of my heart….i love to see others take their time and view my work ….it truly brings joy to see that my words aren’t just being overlook but taken in by those who truly adore them..thank you so jane …sincerely daz

  • linaji

    linaji

    OMG.. this is gonna bring back all those who just don’t know your back..it happens.. we are so so happy you are here again CB. your work is so full of lush visuals and huge FEELINGS.. we are glad you are here at VAVOOM!! THIS IS DEEP NEED!

  • colorblind replied

    Awwww thank you Linaji….truly you’re someone that has grown close to my heart here …dearly and sincerely from i colorblind ….. and i hope that my family comes back …lol i feel abandon …smilez ….but its nice to see family like you still hangs by my side ….thank you linaji i’m glad to have you inside my heart and beside me….sincerely daz

  • Lisa  Jewell

    Lisa Jewell

    I’m dying to be dying for…..

    I felt the rush in this piece…to convey such a feeling is a true talent.

  • colorblind replied

    Thank you lisa …its brings love to my heart to see you once again viewing my work ….awww glad to see your work and be able to spread the love with my redbubble family truly it is

  • JenniferB

    JenniferB

    Hey colorblind!!! It’s great to see that Love hasn’t distracted you from the more important things, like your wonderfully, powerful writing and your friends at redbubble!!! ;-)
    Welcome back, now I can get my regular fix of ‘colorblind’ again.

  • colorblind replied

    Now thats ME girl Jenny B!!!! one of my homeclass favorite family members…smilez
    glad that i have you back to get your daily dosage of my raw kill….lol….and you know i can’t stay away from the family …..THATS FAMILY C’MON NA….LOL….glad that you read my piece though truly i am …xoxooxoxo

  • RuthFroehlinger

    RuthFroehlinger

    This work is amazing. Brilliant – dying for more.

  • colorblind replied

    more to come …waiting this piece gets enough attention than i will unleash more from its slumber …smilez….but till than you can if you want view the rest of my pieces here on the bubble …enjoy….sincerely daz

  • Colleen Milburn

    Colleen Milburn

    Brilliant, beautiful and aching work, CB!!!

  • colorblind replied

    awwww thank you Colleen….a smile has grown on my face ..thank you for that goodnite treat

  • happyfeet5

    happyfeet5

    Let me taste your essence
    for mine is fading
    I fiend for you
    save me
    I am dying for you
    I am glad you have found love for those words are of one who is in love. A junkie for his love.
    Glad to have you back with your marvelous works. Just today I heard Shakira sing She-Wolf in America’s Got Talent and it reminded me of you. Hope we’ll be seeing more of the wolf in you. Iris

  • colorblind replied

    smilez….awww that truly is something that drew a smile on me that grew roots to my soul awwww …you remember that i’m a wolf junkie to …and that my soul is that ….a wolf ….cool that i came to mind….thank you so much …..for your love and support …glad you like it ..sincerely the wolf that has found his paradise …..

  • happyfeet5

    happyfeet5

    But of course. How could I forget you and the wolf in you? Just kept looking to see when you would pop in again. But, no I never forgot. And I am glad I made you smile. You have a family here. Iris

  • colorblind replied

    truly love now …..trying to get over this silently

  • happyfeet5

    happyfeet5

    P.S. And I still remember when I first entered RB and I read your poem about I think it was that you were a salmon swimming from the river to the ocean and how you would not let any obstacle stop you and how you would make something for yourself and your family and I wrote you the one about my son’s Eric’s handicap (dysgraphia) and also one of the little tricks he used to get himself through in school. You really inspired me to start little by little writing here, plus other friends who if they read this, will know who they are.

  • colorblind replied

    i still remember that moment as well thank you so much…and i’m so touched to be someone to inspire ….its not a regular for me to inspire so that is taken to heart…thank you for bringing back such a memory …i hope all is well with you and we continue to keep in touch….thank you for taking the time to reading my pieces …for time is valuable

  • F.A. Moore

    F.A. Moore

    Wonderful writing!

  • colorblind replied

    wonderful of you to share your time with me and tell me so….thank you so much Moore…smilez

  • C J Lewis

    C J Lewis

    Whoa … powerful heartfelt words … great writing :)

  • colorblind replied

    awwww thank you Lewis….beautiful of you to say so truly…..ssmilez

  • blamo

    blamo

    hits home like a hammer on the soul

  • colorblind replied

    I’m glad i could nail such a job…smilez thanks tone always a pleasure to see you buddy

  • BiographyofRed8

    BiographyofRed8

    thank god you are back.. I so missed your poetry, you really do slam dunk those words
    my friend, another brilliant piece, from the pen, from the heart

  • colorblind replied

    smilez….i’m glad to be back for this is the only place i feel my words are appriecated …..i’m glad to be amongst such finely structure artist like you and the rest of my family you all inspire me and this is this has to be the one website i couldn’t do with out …..for i’ve found family in the many of you that call this place home just like i do….i’m glad to have met you and for you to take time to read my work truly ..sincerely daz

  • JennyMac

    JennyMac

    I didn’t know you before, but thanks to linaji I have found you now… glad you returned! Fantastic poetry… look forward to more… : )

  • colorblind replied

    Thanks Jenny ….and oh thru Linaji you found me ….smilez….Linaji is a talented mistress i love her work….I’m glad to have come to have become acquianted with you i hope we can stay in touch and grow to become family here….sincerely daz….and ps …more is on the way just stay tuned….i added more pieces since my return if you ever get the chance to view the rest of my work….take care :)

  • Kristin  Reynolds

    Kristin Reynolds

    Fucking killer. live, breathe, and be that fix, back…there is nothing greater. beautiful, man, love, K xo

  • colorblind replied

    Thanks K xoxoxooxxo back at ya ….smilez glad to make an impact upon you ….truly its nice to know you and read your work ….just lovely

  • Shoaib .
  • colorblind replied

    whoa bro a feature ….!!! truly whatsup …to be featured amongst all the fabolous artist in the group that you have ….thanks man …always a honor to be featured in your group …thanks big bro

  • butchart

    butchart

    you’ve got it bad… and that’s good for all of us…... who can share your lust for love and life in wonderful pieces like this….... tender and hot at the same time…..... bravo…......b

  • colorblind replied

    Thanks B truly glad you like because your pieces are tremendous and to have you hit my page up and view my work is a honor indeed thank you…sincerely daz

  • Ty Beach

    Ty Beach

    Wow…. she is a very lucky woman to be the object of your affection. Beautiful…

  • colorblind replied

    no ….i’m the lucky one to have her in my life ….she has become the planet that revolve myself around drifting round and round in a space of where i only see her and the stars….

  • Cassidy JK (Ra Or Emraeh)

    Cassidy JK (Ra...

    Really gorgeous and romantic Daz. Love it.

  • colorblind replied

    thank you cass …glad to have words from you on this…truly thank you …daz

  • wingsoffire

    wingsoffire

    So beautiful and when we find ourselves in love’s clutches there is only that one, you expressed that magnificently!

  • colorblind replied

    Thank you for reading truly ….your time spent on viewing my work is taking to heart and I dearly and sincerely appreciate it ….daz

  • warmsoul

    warmsoul

    Wow! powerful writing.Love this.

  • colorblind replied

    Glad you do cuz it loves you…smilez ….thank you

  • wingsoffire

    wingsoffire

    Hi Daz, you took the time to read and comment on mine and as writers we support and show mutal respect so thank you as well. Look forward to reading more!

  • colorblind replied 24 days ago

    truly well stated…and since i’m back its time for me to return the favor…smilez

  • marieangel

    marieangel

    powerful write thank you ..respect..

  • colorblind replied 24 days ago

    thank you truly….and respect….glad to have your time…daz

  • hsien-ku

    hsien-ku

    whoever you wrote this about is a very lucky woman.
    such passion in these words, so intense – raw.
    most people live their whole lives without having words like this spoken to them

  • colorblind replied

    sadly i broke up with her last night …its sad… and i truly felt like i shot my heart off into the deep cold realms of the infinite beyonds….into realms that i shall never be able to reach ….i feel completely hollowed out …and by my own hands….i still love her and always will …i just ….never mind…i’m starting to be riddled with all these images and times with her
    its like an invasion and her memories are declaring war upon my treason …upon me ended it ….now i think i am dead…..no longer dying …and not resting in piece …..i’m resting in sorrow and a mass ocean of emotions…..dead…drifting ..drifting drifting

  • hsien-ku

    hsien-ku

    oh sweetheart – i’m so sorry. what an awful time this must be for you. i wish i had some wise advice to give – but all i can say is that i’d rather be in your shoes than hers. poor girl – imagine losing someone as special as you!

  • colorblind replied

    it is …last night was a hard time to go to sleep i wish i could see her once more …kiss her one last time ….take her somewhere and end it properly ….or maybe even work it out to where we could have it back and in full effect but i doubt she want to be together for this like the 3 time i did such a thing ….and you know what they say 3 strikes and you out….so i’m out …and i must go about playing on another team and another game ….hopefully a hit a homer …but i don’t plan on being with no one else…for a while….i love the hell out of her ….and i love your words truly a smile … i wanted to see her today and talk for what might be our last conversation …but i just wanted to see her one last time …thank you though ..sincerely daz

    i don’t even think she was able to see this piece…i really wanted her to read this or hear this from me and the other poems on here that i have written manifested basely off the love i have for her ….

  • jacqleen

    jacqleen 28 days ago

    I LOVEEEEEEEEEEEE how you LOVE with all YOUR heart….and with so much PASSION!!!
    This is breathTAKING…..and LOVED every word here! wow!

  • colorblind replied 24 days ago

    awww thanks i try my best…and seems like my best is working …smilez….i’m glad to have your time and words…truly yours daz….xoxoxo

  • MarkezzAckui ...

    MarkezzAckui ... 28 days ago

    good stuff….love is a beatiful thing…..congrats on finding that special one!

  • colorblind replied 24 days ago

    she is indeed that special one …that only one ..i so adore her …smilez

  • Coronus

    Coronus 24 days ago

    Beauty
    Overdoses again
    Like Marilyn
    And runs through the webs of her veins like heroine
    She is the fix I need

    Gasp! Intoxicating!
    Brilliant poem!

  • colorblind replied 24 days ago

    thank you man truly
    that lines is quickly picked up by those who know of Marilyn Monroe
    and how she died
    i’m glad you likes this ..one of my favs …thanks man

  • princessleah

    princessleah 23 days ago

    aaahhhh…....addictive love, is there any other kind??? Welcome back CB!!

  • blackvixen

    blackvixen 8 days ago

    I am in love with you being in love….....

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