"Hope"

Hope is 18
And through her 18 years
She feels that she’s invisible
Maybe she is
She always departs off into her own world
So maybe she isn’t seen in this world
For she always finds refuge and connection in her own realms
But sometimes she feels as if to be a ghost here amongst the living
So she cuts herself to make sure that blood runs and circulates
The lacerations are like declarations
That declare that she is alive
And that the pulse she feels
Isn’t just her imagination running wild in her inner tunnels
….her veins
….her veins are like sewer drains
Full of shit from assholes
And she suffocates
As her mind is forced to give head to toilet-bowls
Forced into “shit” that is not of her own making
She wears slit wrists as if they were bracelets
And dresses in all black to shadow her feelings
She’s misunderstood by the world and overlooked
She keeps to herself as if communicating was bad for her health
She bleeds, constantly, internally
From the onslaught decreed upon her verbally
Cries so much inside that she drowns inside
So she drains the pain
….the shit
Allows it to protrude through slits
That spits
and vomits
Pours heavy
Drop after drop
Nonstop
Teardrops
That descend from within
Bleeding from her soul
Teardrops pregnant with pain, self-pity and confusion
She lets her wrists cry till they dry
And heal to be a new set of bracelets
No matter how many bracelets she continue to attain
She can only escape the pain
If she decides to find “Hope”


Hope must be found….

I wrote this after talking to a few females that would cut themselves to attain….ESCAPE


Comments

  • OriginallyChris
    OriginallyChrisalmost 6 years ago

    great!

  • thanks dude you already know how i’m coming lol

    – colorblind

  • Catherine  Howell
    Catherine Howellalmost 6 years ago

    This is an incredible piece!! So real that it hurts and that is sometimes what it takes to get to the other side:)

    Keep it real and I’m sure you will.

    very well written!

    Have you tried neopoet.com? or thestartlitecafe.com? These are sites where you can create a profile and post your poetry.

    catherine

  • whoa thankyou for referring me to this websites
    i will be sure to visit asap
    i’m so delighted that you enjoyed my piece
    truly i am
    thank you dear thank you indeed
    for everything you have just woven a smile on dear little ol me lol

    – colorblind

  • JonoCarrick
    JonoCarrickalmost 6 years ago

    You are only 20 and yet so compassionate and empathetic. You actually have approached a really misunderstood mental condition with grace and compassion. Amazing work.

  • thank you Raven….i truly cool to hear this from you
    remarkable…thanks for the time and words

    – colorblind

  • Lisa  Jewell
    Lisa Jewellalmost 6 years ago

    Such an important piece…..written with understanding and style. I will read this often….

  • thank you lisa
    i’m glad you took liking to this
    awww thank you for the fav as well
    you’re such a doll
    xoxoxo

    – colorblind

  • AngelMay
    AngelMayalmost 6 years ago

    Another beauty colourblind, always wondered why young ones do this to themselves, you have expressed her reality with clarity

  • yea i have an encounter with two females that did so and talked them from ever doing ti again i’m glad they stopped….it hurted me to see they’re arms slashed and scarred
    i’m glad you look at my piece
    much love to you May

    – colorblind

  • Cassey
    Casseyalmost 6 years ago

    Excelling writing and statement on self harm. Hope can find hope without a doubt. You commented my writing Maggots in the Mirror. It’s the same subject. I understand Hope well.

    Thank you for this and your other writings. You are not only talented, but also wise and compassionate.

  • maggots in the mirror …that sounds intriguing and i truly must read this after walking the dogs. thanks for the words my fellow poet
    you to are the same
    continue to bring soul

    – colorblind

  • Shanna J. S. Dunlap
    Shanna J. S. D...almost 6 years ago

    This was absolutely amazing colorblind. I can not find the words enough to justify how talented you are with not only your visual art but with your words also. This poem hits hard and it really made me feel something deep. Keep up the great work I just know you are going to go real far in your life and in the process touch a lot of lives and do great things. Keep up the good work. : )

  • awww thank you shanna
    love the love you have plastered upon me
    truly adore and locked away in my heart
    i’m glad it touched you
    truly yours and sincerely yours daz

    – colorblind

  • oneperfectkiss
    oneperfectkissalmost 6 years ago

    thankyou for writing this cb. xxxx

  • no thankyou for reading it
    and adding it to your favs
    love the love you have bestowed upon my work
    thank you

    – colorblind

  • poeticgenius
    poeticgeniusalmost 6 years ago

    well hopefully she does real talk though ohh to many suffer this exact same faith and it goes straight through the cracks and everyone is so mixed in their own drama they don’t devote the attention this situation deserves and the more it gets overlooked the less likely they are to find hope

  • already dude
    glad you tagged this one up

    – colorblind

  • Sally Omar
    Sally Omaralmost 6 years ago

    Fantastic Writing…serious problems..with both young women and men…they are without
    feelings…and this flow of blood makes them feel alive….it is very sad…xoxoxoxo

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