"Blood"
My perspective on how I see blood …..
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"Poetry and Beautiful Women" , 1620, All Around the Styles, All Out Emotion, All Things Poetic, Artistic, Philosophical, Boredom Competitions on the 24/7, Core [C.O.R.E], Creative, Talented, and Unknown, Freedom In Words & Art, Masterpieces: Literary Workshop, Shameless Self-Promotion, The Beginner's Corner (profile page must contain photography experience), Up & Coming Writers and WMGBlood – a gift of life that is passed down each generation
to keep a family lineage upon existence
The sweet nectar that keeps Dracula animated
A gang that suits up in red that battles blue enemies
The adhesive that keeps the distance amongst us all cut short
making us closer then what we refuse to see
Was shed to save the lives
By one who gave us life
..... an existence
The result of a slit wrist
believed to be a way to escape the world
when for them it goes amiss
What a bullet hole vomits
when the surface it resides on belongs to a biped
hit by a foreign object like a comet
The drip-drops that tears drop
When emotions become a tempest
And a heart is filled with emptiness
What a soldier doesn’t mind to spew
For people like me and you
To end the birth of flat lines
To keep life lines
bouncing about like kangaroos
The vital juices of life
That runs in the arteries and veins
That hold the property of life
Till death deactivates their clocks
To activate a door to heaven or hell to live an eternal life
poeticgenius
Nicely done CB you on fire right na cuz straight up blood nice topic I’ll leave em leaking blood, Su wu blood throw up the rag and represent that red shit, Crabs say it’s dead shit, Laying in a puddle of it on your last go around if it go down like that !PG$ baby
colorblind replied
lol thats just like yall damn civilians….lol…..thanks big dawg …..u should know how i’m coming ….like wolverine …teeming with blood ….thats ready to burst from the veins ….that hold them back like reins…...no horseplaying around bring slits to the main veins…...so that blood pours out like rain…...how yall marines say blood makes the grass grow…..well when i’m done …..I welcome you to where the grass grows greener…...have you ever seener…....a demeanor …..much meaner ..than mines….thief of tongues…..leave human bipeds rob of words…...got them catching the holy ghost….but not speaking in tongues…...and i don’t understand that or believe in speaking in tongues…but thats just me…..and me….is unlike any being on this planet….i’m gone….for the simply fact that i can’t stand it…....
tracyxkeema
this poem has a deep resonance for me, it reminds me of a dark time in my life, i remember watching my blood drip to the floor, the colour & consistency, scary & emancipating at the same time, thanks for the words, tracy x
colorblind replied
seems like you have been through somethings that have sculpted you into the strong person you are now…..you are welcome for the words…..and tracy if you ever need to talk i’m all ears and heart…..sincerely daz…...aka colorblind
Shanna S.
This is amazingly written and portrayed. Nicely done colorblind, always a pleasure to view your work. : )
colorblind replied
always a pleasure to hear you enjoyed my work…thank you
tracyxkeema
you’re a gentleman x
colorblind replied
simply put…..i’m me…..
you’re so kind….
Ushna Sardar
colorblind replied
Wow…....YOUR MY NEW BEST FRIEND…..SMILEZ…...THANK YOU DEARLY…...ALWAYS A HONOR…..AND I SEEM TO GET THEM IN THE MORNING SO THEY START MY DAY OFF REAL GOOD …..THANK YOU SO VERY MUCH….SINCERELY COLORBLIND…
Shoaib .
we should form a gang of poets
keep 3rd ward in check
haha
colorblind replied
lol dude you crazed in that brain of a maze
of yours that amazes those that have a will to explore
jenxie
blood- I analyze it every day. Great writing.
colorblind replied
wat do you do….and thank you….truly appreciated