"Fantasies of Death"

“Fantasies of Death”
By:Demaries Isom
January 19, 2009 – MLK B-Day

I want Death to be my ol lady
Because Life a bitch and she hasn’t been acting right lately
Now I love Life
She’s my wife
And I’m stuck with her till Death does us part
But at times I want to leave Life
And propose to Death with giving her my heart…
…She can’t be bad…
…shid…
I done see a lot of niggas….
and even chicks fall victim to Death
And she must be good
because I haven’t seen one person come back to Life
Haven’t heard any bad things about her neither
…but with Life…
I than heard things such as
Life a Bitch
Fuck Life
And even seen niggas commit suicide over her
Now with Death
a lot of niggas scared of her
To confront her
But see me …
I dream of Death
…To kiss Death
…To sex Death
To release my inner being
Ejaculate my soul into her gates of heaven
…To lose myself in her
And find myself in heaven
….But I always awake early in the morning
…I’ll say around seven
To find myself in hell
and married to the devil
…-Life

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I recently have been comparing Life and Death as women
And this is another piece i truly love
so here i share for you to read …enjoy!

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life, poem, poetry, love, death, colorblind

Comments

  • Damien Venditti
    Damien Vendittiover 5 years ago

    nice work CB after seeing you on youtube i get your rhythm and flow much better
    just like Jen … you a natural!!!

  • thanks dude …..but you should know
    this mate name DAMIEN VENDITTI is a natural as well
    …..lol
    be smooth mate…

    – colorblind

  • headfux
    headfuxover 5 years ago

    this is great colorblind, thanks for sharing!

  • thanks i’m going to use it for my performance at a poetry club this saturday….
    do you have any lines that you really like
    and thanks for stopping by enjoy to see things you bring to the bubble….glad you are here on redbubble like other fellow artist here

    – colorblind

  • headfux
    headfuxover 5 years ago

    To release my inner being
    Ejaculate my soul into her gates of heaven
    …To lose myself in her
    And find myself in heaven….this line stood out for me. so well written and an interesting thought provoking topic. no one get’s out of life alive!

    this site fuckin rocks! i love you people on here, in some cases maybe too much! hehe

  • lol thanks
    i will have a video up on youtube of me performing it
    so you can hear it
    glad you like though
    …..you right
    “no one get’s out of life alive!” – but i see death as living
    it is part of the cycle of life …thinking about it so you just continue to living ….in another realm…..i can continue to elaborate on this but it would be so long…lol
    and i love my redbubble family to …lol
    you are a very creative individual…

    – colorblind

  • headfux
    headfuxover 5 years ago

    i look forward to seeing it and good luck! make sure you post the link for us to see. do you have other vids on youtube? can i add you?

  • http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Vcu99HqKuFQ

    of course you can add me
    i will have more videos …i just started to recite my works out loud
    so give me a little time to produce more works for ya…..

    – colorblind

  • Shanina Conway
    Shanina Conwayover 5 years ago

    Hey CB you have such a unique vision and way of looking at things…love this work and concept…
    I want Death to be my ol lady
    Because Life a bitch and she hasn’t been acting right lately……..brilliant;)

  • lol thanks Shanina
    glad you like …how have you been
    i seen some of your recent pieces that i have been missing out on
    they are lovely
    and thanks ….i try to look at things in another perspective

    – colorblind

  • Niki Rossi
    Niki Rossiover 5 years ago

    I’m not real great at writting
    but I like what you have to say
    It’s a wonderfully sad poem

  • Niki Rossi
    Niki Rossiover 5 years ago

    I also like the comparison between life and death
    Wonderfully done

  • thanks ….Doll eyes
    i will have a video up
    of me performing this soon …hopefully

    – colorblind

  • JenniferB
    JenniferBover 5 years ago

    Hey, once again another great poem, love the whole rhythm and flow of it all and Death is always a tricky subject to tackle, you’ve managed to achieve that fine balance between hope and despair, I’d love to hear you reading this one. Just a query about a couple of lines:

    And even seen niggas commence suicide over her

    Just wondered, should the word ‘commence’ be commit?

    And

    and even chicks for victim to Death

    Maybe the word ‘for’ before victim should be ‘fall’ ?

    Your call of course, being the poet, just a couple of suggestions is all, ignore them if you want. Other than that this poem is awesome and the words fly like rapidfire bullets out of a machine gun, love the way it slows down and eases into the final lines, like the breathless sigh after an orgasm LOL.

    Great work!

  • love the comment!!!
    wow….and thanks i didn’t even notice those errors
    glad you spotted them for me…And i’m glad you like Jenny B
    because i admire your skills with words
    I will have a video of this up soon on youtube
    ….lol " breathless sigh after an orgasm"….lol
    thank you alot ….bout to get to editing….

    – colorblind

  • JenniferB
    JenniferBover 5 years ago

    my pleasure, can’t wait to see it on YouTube. :)

  • http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Vcu99HqKuFQ

    my first video
    of another poem

    – colorblind

  • JenniferB
    JenniferBover 5 years ago

    yep, seen that one the other day, love the slang/street style and pace, ever thought of putting some of your stuff to music?

  • ….every now and than…i might recite to a beat ….thanks JENNY B
    i’m have to really go about doing so now…

    – colorblind

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