"The Becoming of One"
This is a piece that was inspired by the challenge “Nudity”.
I find it myself to be a nice piece
And a piece just isn’t a piece if it doesn’t bring a smile to your mouthpiece
...SMILEZ
But I hope you all like and if you really like when the Nudity challenge
starts to accept votes vote for it, but make sure you like because I know there are tons of fine artist out there with marvelous talent.
Just vote for your favorite whether its mines or another’s
Well colorblind signing out …much love to the bubble family …PAz (PEACE)
"The Becoming of One" belongs to the following groups:
# 1 ARTISTS OF REDBUBBLE , "Poetry and Beautiful Women" , 1620, All Things Poetic, Artistic, Philosophical, Blue Room, Creative, Talented, and Unknown, Masterpieces: Literary Workshop, RedBubble Nude, The Beginner's Corner (profile page must contain photography experience), The Word Tree, Up & Coming Writers and WMGQuicker than the eye can undress her
She portrays to me a picture
That not even Leonardo Da Vinci himself
Could portray better
We otter
nor word
nor sound
nor letter
But join together like letters
To spell out our love for each other
And though she undress
I continue to undress
Till I find her soul
That the body clothes
Till I get its address
To deliver…
my love
my all
my soul to
So she can catch word
Of how I really feel to-wards to ….. Her
And as I enter her body
To find her soul
I find myself in a state
Where pleasure has given me wings
Its seems like I’m in heaven
All I’m missing is the halo
I can feel that I’m drawing closer to her soul
The temperture is rising and our pores are like geysers
Shooting out sweat that runs down our bodies
That appear to be a prisoner of Love
But in reality are two innocent beings
Fused in one
Shackled by Love’s shackles
My soul has made it into the inzone
And her soul it tackles
Our bodies go into a climax
While our souls fuse and become one
It looks like something you’ll see in a movie
And like every movie the climax comes to end
The destination has been reached
The journey has just begun
And like the beginning
It is far from the end….
Amber Elizabet...
Wonderful passionate write))))
colorblind replied
I’m glad you like
SMILEZ
I SO GLAD YOU TOOK TIME OUT YOUR DAY TO READ MY PIECE!
MUCH LOVE TO YOU
HAVE A GREAT DAY
Damien Venditti
excellent CB .. congrats on being featured : )
colorblind replied
thanks DV featured on what …..? mate
Damien Venditti
this is featured in the Masterpeice Literary Group
Damien Venditti
sorry CB .. they sent out a bmail saying this was featured but i can’t see it on the feature page .. your a featured member of the group
colorblind replied
Oh really ….i didn’t even know
THANKS MAN!!!
colorblind replied
I SEE THERES A GUY NAMED DAMIEN VEDITTI
A MATE THAT LIKES TO ROCK ON
IS ALSO FEATURED ON THERE AS WELL
COOL MR MISFIT
Amber Elizabet...
Aww thank you so much x
colorblind replied
no thanks needed all thanks go’s to you
Amber Elizabet...
Aww super smiles =))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))) to you always =)
colorblind replied
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
your the smile that makes me happy
awww
back at you amber
Amber Elizabet...
WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO HOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
CloudChaser
this is really beautiful….very beautiful…
colorblind replied
thank you cloud glad you like
i love your work ….very beautiful back to you
MistressZombie
Wow!
colorblind replied
glad you stopped by thanks for viewing
wow….lol
what is wow to you….lol
giovanni
a great piece! enter her body to find her soul… ya bro! nice work indeed
colorblind replied
fasho…see we think alike…lol
great minds always do….lol