"We're Only Human"

Great critique! Sometimes the very thing we so crave is the thing that destroys us….freedom to choose. As I read it, I had to nod in agreement to just about every line.

The human brain got as large as it did only to deceive other humans…

I cannot take too seriously a work that judges others by their affinity for Facebook or Myspace when it is posted on…. the internet, although it is well written and a good read. On the whole just a bit too judgemental for me, I like to see the word “I” in written works more than the word “we” but thats just my preference and opinion, and this is well-written.

bloody hell! (excuse my french) all I can say is bravo my friend, the most exciting piece of prose i have ever read, I keep saying it, but, you are immensly talented, this poem just hits home, it is so tru about life, my particular fav part is “Put the money in the bag I want everything”
“Even them Naked Apes” such a brilliant line, so do you sing too? I dont know as a rap maybe this would be excellent, you could even design your own cd covers lol sorry…i just see you going really far in life, excellent work and now i am off to read the other one i missed…PIE x

Yeah I’m not one for sugar-coating, hope I didn’t across as being too harsh. Like I stated above this is captivating writing and I did enjoy reading it.

It was a great piece but I’d expect nothing less especially on such a great topic us what we are some would say a few were the scum of the earth but who made that scum ha ha. I really enjoyed reading it though.

Great writing, some powerfully strong statements in there. We are, after all, only Apes with less body hair, but even saying that might be an insult to Apes, who, unlike so-called human beings, do not set out to destroy their own species for oil and money. Money is the root of all evil, it is a form of control to help the rich get richer and the poor remain poor.

Yes it is true that we do have bad sides yet you have to remember that to that side of the coin there are those who get abused by that side of the coin that the generousity and kindness is someimes taken away-(should read my writing black) But I hate the saying that we are only human cos we have so much power and so much choice that people get into the habit of not realising what we are capable of and only realise it when they have made a istake and than use the line Im only human. But for looking on one side of the coin this is great it brings around the evil side of people

HAHAHA good one. But yea I know how you feel the bad seems to have over powered the good. The power have all the say and the weak have nothing its sad that society is that way

yes and e always have to remember that. And hey i know what ur saying

i think when some of us say only human…it is to aid our own journeys of acceptance and perhaps forgiveness…
some of us have been fucked over to such an extent that the hatred and anger can be so overwhelming its hard to live life…to realise that those who have hurt us are themselves “only human” and full of pain and insecurity and etc etc… is in the aim of helping the ‘victim’ not be overwhelmed by their hate resentment or urge for retribution… (oh god i hate the word victim…but thats a different story)
at least thats what i’m doin when i use the phrase only human… i cant really speak for others, i do see that its gets tossed around a fair bit without actual thought put in to its meaning and, ultimately.. consequences of it’s being misinterpreted, misused and abused by those who simply choose not to take responsibility for any of their actions…
humans are such complex creatures…capable of both the most altruistic acts, and capable of the most destructive acts…all mingled into one…
no wonder we are all so messed up…
on a side note…how old are you? where you around when technology as we know it now was still in its infancy… before mobile phones and the world wide web and all the beauty of modern communication corrupted and blessed humanity simultaneously…
its such a trip to think back on when i was younger and we all communicated so differently…

lol… go read all my stuff and you’ll get an idea…
I’ve come thru quite a few hells to get here to this life…
its in some of my poems… and other bits in descriptions of pics here n there…
but most of the worst shit i keep to myself…
long story short is for years i was a victim
but i dont feel that it is who i am…
the word victim… it makes people look at you a certain way… talk to you a certain way, with a judgemental pity, but not sympathy or empathy…
i prefer to say i was a casualty of my life and of what those around me did and did not do…
but the reality is… in instances like when someone who ‘loves’ you tries to kill you…and almost does… the only word for that really is victim… and its something i wont ever escape… i had to deal with having been a victim, without having to be one for all time…

One thing I noticed and loved was how every two lines were brought around full circle>>
And having the two lined-one word breaks every so often really brought a the feeling of longevity>> like I was really taken on a journey through the evolution of mankind>>
With our carnivor nature>>who says animalistic has to be destructive?right?

All we have to do is set aside our differences
to see we have many similarities
To bring about a change
They say we’re only human, but thats no excuse
Think about it…If we have enough power to destroy the world
Why don’t we have enough power to save the world
But yet We’re Only Human
yes! we’re only human colour! love this!!!!!
very well written!!!
huggles xoxox

i literally found myself smiling when i read this one. this is probably my favorite one out of them all, although all your work is very good. GREAT GREAT GREAT job!

well this is number one, and then the next two i’ll get back to you with! haha. it’s before school and i’m in a huge rush.

oh MY works…okay…hum…i really take pride in the “in my opinion- the meaning of life” one…also, the “vulnerable” one…and lastly, “remembering”- which was actually written about that person i thought was the “perfect guy”, but it ended, lol.

it was good, don’t have any homework, thankfully! haha. yourself?

you should do whatever you enjoy doing—and if you live in new york, it’s supposed to snow tomorrow (yet again), so it’d be cool to go outside and have fun like that with your friends, just an idea. i wish i could do that, but of course i have deathly school, haha.

killer dog

deeper thinking in here

u ever read origin of the species ?

Thinking and Writing.. absolutely!

Purely genius….a very brave and bold move CB…loved every single word, it blew ma mind

Yeah honey….we’re only human. Methinks we could take a few lessons from the apes. Wonderful writing. xxx

Wonderful perspective – I like the way you presented this. Cheers, S.

All we have to do is set aside our differences
to see we have many similarities
To bring about a change
They say we’re only human, but thats no excuse.....EXACTLY!!! Just love this part, I felt in my blood! Love this piece Colorblind…it really spoke to me.

Brilliant written, full of emotion and power. Thought provoking and intense in it’s truthfulness.
Congrats on two well deserved features!!!

fabulous ,

I think that what makes humanity so fascinating is its good and evil aspects. I species with compassion and logic and the power to create. But then one the one hand the power to destroy, exploit, cause suffering and pain.
I like to think that there are far more good people out there than bad.

yea loco dats dat shhh! yu know what time it is !

Congrats…..featured work

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Wow – congratulations on all your features – this is a meaningful piece and I enjoyed the rhythms in my head as I read it.

Congratulations CB on the well deserved feature. I’m not one for words (unfortunately).....but my sentiments exactly. I enjoyed reading this and it really gels with me. Regards Mel

Awe what the hell, I’m only human … LOL! It was a bit sinister, but enjoyed the read. Well done.

hey i saw this featured in #1 art. of rb congrats

Great concept and I love the delivery of this…. I love to follow your mind through each one of your poems…. You speak of someone much older than you and I and I love that…. a poet you are indeed, and a great one might I add…. love it!

Great stuff pump up the VOLUME …..................

i am awed…... so much to think about here.. your honesty for one.. your artistry for another..
we are humans , and yet we are depraved because of..

you have a wisdom , and it shows strongly. and your art really speaks to me for real

Wow….Wow….WOW! What a powerful piece Daz! You have a brilliant mind young man and what a fantastic way to present this great work. GREAT write and I loved hearing you read it…..AWESOME!

Brilliant writing AND the video totally rocks. There is so much truth inside your words. Damn Daz….i LUV this xxxxx

Great one CB!! xx

Powerful piece brother…you sure know to bring it when the creative juices are flowing…one love.

Hey….when you become famous…don’t forget about the little people…. =)

You keep growing so much….creatively….it’s great that we cam come along for the ride!!

BIG HUGZZZZZ

XOXO

This is awesome Daz!! Every word so profound and speaks of the truth! We are only human and in our life we have to remain some kind of substance within it to keep the harmony about it, so many people get sucked into living for materialistic things , those things simply don’t matter, I mean hell we can’t take it with us can we? But, people of all different cultures and color have brought meaning into my life and left their mark, you my special friend are one of those people with your giving of your heart through your words. You are beautiful, so often I say that because as it’s true and according to your fan base dear one they agree!!!! You are a talent that excels more and more with each word that you print Daz!! Have a good day, and sending you love and hugs from the Wingsoffire!

EXCELLENT !!!!

The poem is absolutely incredibly brilliant. The video and audio add another dimension completely. You are as talented at performing your poetry as you are at writing it.

CONGRATS DAZ!! BRILLIANT!!

That is fantastic, Colourblind!! Really enjoyed hearing your voice, the music, would have liked to have seen your artwork on there instead of photos, (that would be an enormous effort, I know) especially liked the monkey with the gun.

amazing and an instant fave it has moved my soul….....for many reasons and I particularly liked the mother…..next verse earth connected but yet disconnected…ive tried this a few times but because it dares to be different reversed the process maybe i will try in the future..often we need to reflect on others works and slow down on posting our own im jetlagged at the moment so arrived in oz and body clock still in limbo after a week result is time for redbubble smile well done on all these features love the rap to this one ..love and light angelx

HUGE!

Profound and I cannot find words just yet, letting it sink in a digest

We been brainwashed, programmmed. Too dumb down to save the world :-(

nice youtube by the way