"Just A Mere Dream"

“Just A Mere Dream”
By: Demaries Isom

I saw this chick in a dream
she appeared to be more then a dream
but a world
unseen
by eyes…..
open that is
but seen
by eyes closed that is
only when the mind is at rest
can u see her at best
she the unfound treasure
hidden in a forbidden chest
locked away
unseen by the world
for see this girl
appears to be a world unfurled
in the mind
the unclear vision in the crystal ball
thats clearly seen by those who bear no walls
just an open mind
that can be occupied
by her presence
her essence
for see the mind would be pleasant
with her within
a gift
a present
shes whats happening like the present
something to behold and wait for like the future
and to never let go of like the past
she a secret
the hush and mind keeps it
hush
shhhhh….
it doesn’t say a thing
confidential, it stays
on top of the mind it lays
comfortably
relaxed
chilled…
like H2O in the back of the fridge
she’s the icy bridge
dangerous
but she nothing but a mere dream
a world unseen
but hopefully the future holds her
and I will live the dream
the unseen
only seen by me
the vision
that multiplies
and does division
to my vision
to where I’m out of commission
and awaken again her vision

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You ever knew of a lady to be to good to be true, well this poem is about them type of lwomen. To good to be true, Just a mere dream for the dreamer.

Comments

  • Damien Venditti
    Damien Vendittiabout 6 years ago

    very nice CB ….. if you have more writing be sure to share with us

  • sorry about the delay
    didn’t see that you hit this one up
    thanks man
    and thanks to you
    i did add more work

    – colorblind

  • Amber Elizabeth Fromm Donais
    Amber Elizabet...about 6 years ago

    Ireally like this write very descriptive awesome write =D

  • jianina
    jianinaabout 6 years ago
    It makes me wonder why there is a phrase out there for just those “day” dreams>

    because i know that they are not talking about a nap.
    It is a phrase for those girls that can make you dream with your eyes awake.
    A universal stare minimizing the concept of worldly.
    Cause even in the deep of your night she is your moon…
    But she doesn’t go away in the day…
    and that is not to good to be true, it is fact.
    Just because the sun is out doesn’t mean that there stars aren’t there.
    The universe stays in place and so does she>>

    I really respect this piece>>
    reading your side bar I subconsciously had high expectations..
    I realized that after I read it because I was so surprised at all of the thought provocation it carried!! You have a great skill to write between your thoughts and a what would be a conversation, only you have spoken so well on what essentially has never been a topic of discussion. I really feel like you brought something completely relatable in a way i have never read before and it was a pleasant read>>nicely done.. much respect>>Nina 0:)

  • wandalechene
    wandalecheneabout 6 years ago

    great writing my friend

  • S .
    S .over 5 years ago

    damn man you def seem to be stepping up your game and growing a lot as a writer, thats fucking so awesome to see lil bro
    i see such awesome things in your talent

  • THANK YOU MAN COMING FROM MY BIG BRO THAT MEANS ALOT
    DUDE I JUST GET PUMPED UP FROM READING WORKS SUCH AS YOURS
    ERIKA15
    JENNIFER B
    BUTTERFLIES AND BULLETS
    SALLY
    ASTORETH
    DAMIEN V
    AND THE REST OF MY REDBUBBLE FAMILY
    YALL JUST KEEP ME THINKING
    AND ON MY TOES
    FA SHO MAN

    – colorblind

  • Erika .
    Erika .over 5 years ago

    This is so awesome!!!

    but she nothing but a mere dream
    a world unseen
    but hopefully the future holds her
    and I will live the dream

    Keep dreaming, my friend..she’ll come along. :D Lovely poem.

  • i’m dreaming now …..lol i dream 24/7
    and thank you erika truly lovely of you to read it

    – colorblind

  • Selkie
    Selkieover 5 years ago

    Haunting and wild, like a scent of lilacs you barely catch in the air…beautiful.

  • beautiful comment
    lovely
    i love your words…..mmmm lol
    thank you truly

    – colorblind

  • poeticsoul
    poeticsoulover 5 years ago

    yea colorblind!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i saw this as a feature in freedom in words you go boy lovin it
    you r killin it

  • awwwww thanks for the love
    truly love the support
    if i’m killin it than you must be murdering things…lol

    – colorblind

  • poeticgenius
    poeticgeniusover 5 years ago

    nicely done I fell on the back burner but u keeping the kitchen heated.

  • thanks son i try man….lol
    you know i got your back you got mines son

    – colorblind

  • blackvixen
    blackvixenover 5 years ago

    once again..brilliant work….u trully are a genius!!!!!!

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