The novice monk and the master

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The novice monk stood before the master,

“How long have you been here?”

“Four score year master” came the reply.

“Why are you still here?”

“Oh for there is so much more to learn and understand master.”

“Yet you have never wandered beyond the walls of this temple?”

“No master, for it is away from the world I gain true understanding of it”

“Yet you preach to others about the way they live in that world?”

“For I am able to see clearly the world by being apart from it”

“Are you the same person as when you came here all those years ago?”

“Oh yes, for I see all the world in others, so realise I am here to learn to be me”

“Yet you have never lived the world of humankind, never lived the lessons that you preach the results to others, passing judgement on the lives they have lived”

“But master, that would mean changing who I am, leaving the world that I live in, living in a world not ordered by the rule and rite and word of this order…”

The master smiled,

“The stagnant pond has but two hopes, that the sun and wind dry it up and return its birthplace, or one day the river may find it again and carry it with it once more forwards.”

“So you have lived your life as the pond, refusing to let the world into it, harassed by the wind and rain, fermented by the sun. Your fear has created a skin around your life, mirrored in the walls you hide behind here.”

“But master, look at the words I have written, the speeches I have given..”

“No, it is time to leave this place”

“Yet master, my days are drawing to a close. Where shall I go and what should I do?”

“Then you have the final deadline to see what you have learnt”

“But I want to learn more master”

“So take the gift and go learn in the few days you have left, for we have failed you here”

“For you leave here the same as you entered, untouched by life”

“You speak our words but do not live them, you want to learn, but fail to understand to learn you first must be willing to change, for change is the most constant thing in life. Only if you need to learn will you change, for change comes from within, not in the words we speak, your the robes and titles, but in our very nature”

“But master, what then of my life?”

“Go find it and live the changes or die feeling the loss of not living”

As the novice walked with his staff through the walls of the temple, his eyes blinded by rejection and fear, he looked backwards towards the temple, and fell over the edge of the cliff.

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A tale of where learning meets theory


  • annacuypers
    annacuypersover 5 years ago

    What a beautiful tale of wisdom !! Did you write this or is it an old eastern myth/story retold ?
    Normally I don’t read anything on bubble because my English isn’t good enough and I’m myself more a person of images, more than words… But this drew my attention, I’m glad I’ve read it before I go to sleep now, beautiful and wise words, well done my friend, hugs, anna

  • From my own pen Anna and your English is better than you give your self credit for. Thank you and hugs Richard

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  • Maxoperandi
    Maxoperandiover 5 years ago

    Very apt work! Love it

  • Thank you Max, posting these old stories is getting the writing bug going again

    – clickinhistory

  • Lindamell
    Lindamellover 5 years ago

    makes you think …don’t it…wonderful SF x

  • Thanks Linda

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  • Tempe
    Tempeover 5 years ago

    a man of many talents , wonderous.

  • Thanks Tempe

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  • Dara Hurt
    Dara Hurtover 5 years ago

    Another brilliant story of insight (and the lack thereof!) I know that there are people in the world much like the novice..they “try on” new identities and immerse themselves in one dogma or another, never realizing that all they truly seek lies within….
    Thank you for sharing this!!

  • Thanks Dar, looking through more old ones I might post while working on a new one.. many clothes and one that we all ignore that really matters :)

    – clickinhistory

  • Hélène David-Cuny
    Hélène David-Cunyover 5 years ago

    You say these are old stories of yours. How exactly old were you when you wrote this one ? This is an interesting point. I start to suspect you are the next reincarnation of H.H. the Dalai Lama… ;-)

  • LOL tried it once and decided coming back as a nettle was more fun ;) and yes lol they are my stories

    – clickinhistory

  • wigs
    wigsover 5 years ago

    this is brilliant….. great writing…. would love to see this in Writing: Persuing Happiness

  • Thanks, never thought about entering this into groups, will look into it later

    – clickinhistory

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