Me
He use to feel the notes/ instead he feels the pain/ he used to hear the music/ now thats drowned out by the rain/he wanna sing a song but he could never sing/ He could only talk, and he talked to hide his pain/ Inside of his closet is where his feelings hang/ Hanging from wire hangers, soaked from all the rain/ And leaks in the ceiling dont help them dry again/ So so long bluebirds, and blue skys is covered up by grey/ Living in the Shadow of the man he used to be/ Living in a shadow is a painful mystery/ The blackness covers up the white in his eyes/he use to be human now he just a disguise/ Use to stand out now he just one of those guys/ he just one of those dogs prone to sin and cheating lies/ Im jus Talkin bout me
Brett Foster
I feel it Bro.
Don’t forget though, the power comes from within, you just gotta drag it out no matter how hard it kicks and screams.
Roscoe Davis III replied
I appreciate it Brett
vinee
I love this line “Hanging from wire hangers, soaked from all the rain/ And leaks in the ceiling dont help them dry again”.great piece!!
Roscoe Davis III replied
I always truly appreciate your comments vinee. Thank you
Beautifuldreamer
I love your keen descriptions, you write like no one else I know!
jianina
You know….the more you write what you don’t want people to see you will find reflection of yourself and how you want to be seen>>just don’t be impatient with yourself because you will use all your energy stopping others from bringing you down while you won’t put your own self up…just do right by yourself>>
great writing…keep it coming!!
Roscoe Davis III replied
I will thanks for the encouragement jianina
Roscoe Davis III replied
Thanks jianina. You put these words up a minute ago but this my first time really thinking about what you was saying. wise advice.
tinkster08
I love this! This is beautiful! Nice similies and images! Beautiful, simply beautiful!
Roscoe Davis III replied
Thanks Tinkster. I appreciate your comment.
jianina
no prob…it nice sometimes to be reassured of the things that you already know!! im sure you have a good feeling of what to do and how you want to do things>>just don’t forget that your instincts are never against yourself, so insecurities shouldn’t ever be given priority!!..everyone feels bad sometimes…but really>>for how long reflects your charcter!!
Nanabush
well written and feels like a song, it should be sung! You are very talented.
Roscoe Davis III replied
Thanks Nanabush
Gleniceava
Keep writing, let it out. Your strength is showing and growing.