Metamorphosis....The Butterfly Effect

Clararty
Author: Clararty
Word Count: 159
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Metamorphosis....The Butterfly Effect

Metamorphosis....The Butterfly Effect belongs to the following groups:

! ♥♥All About Hearts♥♥ !, 1 In The Beginning - Ancient Practices, Spiritual Art and The Healing Journey

Well done to ‘NativeCharm’ who added her ideas which helped to complete this poem….and thank you to all the other amazing artists and writers whojoined in and had a go.
Here is the completed Poem

Sometimes when it’s raining
On the pane that is my heart
And in that anguished straining
Feels my world is all apart

Somewhere, somewhen I realise
This liquid moisture gold
Has washed me into springtime
And cleansed away the cold

Of my deepest darkest winter
That terrified my mind
Causing icicles to splinter
The fear; so sublime

To the new life that starts growing
And the grub in silence sings
Those tears are drops of magic
To give the butterfly its wings

Which Open up to freedom:
The ultimate embrace
In a sky which held no color
Now glitters every space

And those tears so filled with wisdom
They ripple and they swirl
Across the pond that is creation:
See the butterflies unfurl.

  • Silvia Manuela

    Silvia Manuela

    This is soundling beautiful.

  • Steven Frisby

    Steven Frisby

    Reminders of time and magic
    Are always there to see
    Infinite fruiting is to come
    From the great World Tree

  • Clararty

    Clararty

    Wow that is beautiful Steven…Your the first one in for this next verse so far. Ive been guided to put in the 4th one to arrive…but maybe this will be a beautiful ending for it.

  • Barkertron

    Barkertron

    And each flutter of that butterflies wings
    Resonates so deeply inside all things-
    The lost melodies of those above
    Have found their place in tears of love…

  • Clararty

    Clararty

    Very nice Barkertron, but you’re number 2….The 4th one along is the chosen one.

  • Naomi Downie

    Naomi Downie

    when laughter love and longing,
    enter my cocoon, it fills me with
    waterfalls of warmth
    of my promise and potentials.
    I shake and riggle gently
    letting go of grief,
    the ending of this small space
    as my wings have chance to move
    I breath in my new life
    my new beauty,
    new freedom is just awakinging.

    all the best with your poem, here is my attempt. hope you get your fourth.

  • NativeCharm

    NativeCharm

    I`m new here. I present my verse.
    ___
    Opening to freedom, the ultimate embrace
    I pass moments in sky, without a trace.
    Moments come, and moments go.
    And life has colour wherever I grow.

  • NativeCharm

    NativeCharm

    I would like to revise that..no delete option

  • NativeCharm

    NativeCharm

    Opening to freedom, the ultimate embrace
    I pass moments in the sky, without a trace
    Moments come, and moments grow
    And life has colour wherever I go

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