Stars

Night’s Celestial Bodies
Winking so with sharp ease
Coldness,
Cruel,
Crisp and
Clean…
Bathing us in their night wrought sheen.

A pale veil of
Shimmering jewels
Light so pure
Like ethereal pools.

Vacant sky, Darkness dimmed
Distant stars to light again.

Wishful wondering
Thoughts of sorrow
Hopeful glances
For the morrow

Stories of old
told on plains of night.
Formations bold
ne’er hidden from sight.

Curtains of diamond
hide in the sun.
Mysterious depths,
unyielding, to be won.

My eyes caught it briefly
the death of a star.
It’s brightness was a flash
Falling
Disappearing
like a blazing streaked tear.

To hold the child as it cried,
my heart felt numb and cold inside.
A tear fell softly to the ground,
a star was born with a shattering sound.
Its brightness dimmed our own true sun,
A warmth that brought and encouraged fun.
The child looked up, its eyes shone bright
and held the beauty with its sight.
I released my grasp,
the child flew free.
It looked back
and remembered me.

A ring of light, so pure and true
circles the heavens
timeless expanse with pin pricked lights
moves with precision
my eyes shone wide

Sing with me, O stars above
Creations masterpieces
Signs of love
Venus and Saturn
Orion and all
Sing the songs
to make the call

Lights like candles
burning bright
true forms hidden
far from sight.

Mysterious veil
concealing so
for a futures past
to never know

Teachers of history
Hang one by one
History’s tales
Said and done
Time always changing
But never far
The past is what you see
When you look at a star

~Jennifer Renee

Jennifer Ellison

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This is a poem that I wrote for creative writing class in high school some 14 years ago

the assignment was to use 13 different poetic/prose ways to describe something
alliteration…haiku…etc….

so this is what I had come up with…

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poetry, stars, haiku, heaven, prose

Comments

  • margpie
    margpiealmost 4 years ago

    this touched, brilliant work, I love that end line “The past is what you see
    When you look at a star” spot on. Fab poem :)

  • Thank you…
    that part was inspired from once reading that the light we see from the stars is actually not the light that is being shone at that moment…since it takes time for light to travel,
    so we are seeing the past…
    i guess if a star were to die, that depending on how far away it was,
    it could take years for us to see the resulting nova or miss it in the sky

    – Jennifer Ellison

  • Marion Chapman
    Marion Chapmanalmost 4 years ago

    very beautiful poem. great rhythm

  • Thank you

    – Jennifer Ellison

  • Alison Pearce
    Alison Pearcealmost 4 years ago

    Fantastic Jen!

  • thanks Alison

    – Jennifer Ellison

  • DarKarsean
    DarKarseanover 2 years ago

    beautiful work…Tony