Love in the woods
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# 1 ARTISTS OF REDBUBBLE , ! Creative Writing & Poetry !, "Poetry and Beautiful Women" , All Things Poetic, Artistic, Philosophical, Art Inspired by Dreams, Creative Poetry Challenges, Freedom In Words & Art, Live, Love, Dream: and The beauty of poetryin the quiet forest
in the land of mushrooms
knock the door
of silence and
bring it to life
little sweet senses
keep them
afloat
always a joy
always a joy
always a joy
keep your hair
flying
open your
mind
to the wisdom
of your senses
a thousand times
a thousand times
will
never
be enough
it will tingle you
all the way
into
delight
into delight
and make you forget
so many
things
as you get
it going
up and down
up and down
and
let
it going
will take you
to the edge
a beetle on the
ground
let it run, leap,
jump
and fly
as you fall down
on the grass
Matt Roberts
Nice. Reminded me in the beginning of the James Herbert book ‘Once’, which I’ve still yet to finish :p
chugginrail replied
thank you matt….you ve got me curious about this novel Once….hope to get a copy soon:)...hope you finish yours soon:))).....
Naylor
Sweet !! This is a psychodelic piece for sure … Love in the woods is a wonderful thing ;)
chugginrail replied
:) thank you naylor…your comment is alwys appreciated:))))
Christie Moses
Free flowing and expressive. xoxo
chugginrail replied
thank you christie:)))...xoxo
Rita Agostinelli
Beautiful writing! ’...knock the door of silence and bring it to life’ ...very nice..lovely words and image. :))
chugginrail replied
thank you rita…:))
Jane17 17 days ago
Love the carefree joy in this poem, a reminder to indulge as we did as children. great piece..
chugginrail replied 16 days ago
thank you jane:)
JaneSolomon 17 days ago
Wonderful. xx
chugginrail replied 16 days ago
thank you jane:)
George Coombs 11 days ago
A sense of joy in life here and I loved the line referring to “knocking on the door of silence” – sensitive and engaging writihg
chugginrail replied 11 days ago
thank you george:)
warmsoul 11 days ago
Beautiful words and imagery
chugginrail replied 10 days ago
thank you warmsoul:)
CDeblin 11 days ago
I could feel the rhythm of life(love?) going through me reading this piece. Imagined a guitar being strummed by the ‘lover’ too…..yes, “engaging” as George Coombs suggested.
:-) Cobie
chugginrail replied 10 days ago
thank you cobie :)