No One Cares
No One Cares
I’m an old man, and I don’t care
I have a family
I have two girls.
I have two boys
Not mine defined, but,
None the less, mine, default.
I have a wife, true love,
My side, which I know.
Why am I so sad?
My heart searches for the love!
The love it desires
The love it needs to beat
The life that it brought to bare
No one cares, Old man they say.
Why, why old man?
I tried, I worked, I provided!
No one cares
Here to-day, sat alone,
To-morrow gone,
No one cares.
Chris.T.
12/2/2012
Comments
Love is unattainable in this world. Other people can never fulfill us. There is a love far more greater than all the riches and power of this world. A very wonderful written work. I pray you do real love.
Thank you so much for taking the time to read my work and also you wonderful comment, so deep…..
– chrisuk
You have a lovely piece and the depth was deeply felt. It inspired a work of my own.
http://www.redbubble.com/people/donna19/writing...
Thank you Donna for your kind comment and to think my work inspired you to write I’m flattered…………
– chrisuk
Love shall yet be yours. Believe and it will be waiting beyond the golden gate. Poignant and beautiful writing.
This is very sad and moving….Thank you so much for sharing….Wishing you happiness and love….:)))
Thank you Laurie for taking the time to read and commet on this poem, at times I feel as if the world has forgotten how to love and care for one another, its so sad but true.
– chrisuk