ARE WE THERE YET?

The southing sad and setting sun
Deep dipping burnished twilight gold
Now flecked with rust and fading dun
As the glimmering year grows cold
Last brimming days of tide and drift
The rosy sea at moonless ebb
The empty sands a vacant shrift
Soon frost will silver winter’s web

The supple leaves that once soft sighed
With youthful whispers in the spring
Now rustle restless hard and dry
Like sad old men left chattering
On branches heaving in the breeze
Their crusty age torn down by winds
Their tumbling fall a listless ease
The mulching of their mould begins.


Chris1249

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autumn, cooler, gold, rustle mould, sad, short summer

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  • uncleblack
    uncleblackover 1 year ago

    just wonderful…that wistful end of summer..

  • LoveWitness
    LoveWitnessover 1 year ago

    so well written absolutely delightful read! “the supple leaves that once soft sighed” you are a master wordsmith!

  • Drew Trotter
    Drew Trotterover 1 year ago

    Beautiful, evocative writing. Fall is in the air and the seasons sway.

  • Vesna VD
    Vesna VDover 1 year ago

    The rosy sea at moonless ebb
    The empty sands a vacant shrift
    Soon frost will silver winter’s web

    I hope not so soon, but finding the beauty of your words is never soon enough Chris, I missed it

  • Jenifer DeBellis
    Jenifer DeBellisover 1 year ago

    Don’t get tangled in winter’s web, my friend. I miss you :/