I want a tiny rhyme.simple sharp and plain.to knit your thoughts with mineto be with you again.
Wanting’s all I doNothing matters muchbut smell and taste of youhere to hold and touch
you sharp want smell tiny again rhymes knit matters
Short, brief, beautiful, and, also, extremely well said! ;-)
thanks Paul, small things like this are really nice to write ( But who am I to tell you that) apart from being small and sweet there is this technical joy as well from cutting away again and again to get to the real core of something
Hehehe… someone’s influence going on here? I love it… of course!
sort of, I had a piece that was awkward and cumbersome and when I edited it down. I thought hello I know this story.
Beauty in simplicity. x
simple rhymes are best / to authentic’ly express / the beauty of want :)
Loving your tiny rhyme, but adore your big ones too!
hmmm…perhaps that did not come out quite right – wanting to say this:the tiny rhyme is different, fresh and perfectly cute, but I so do love and perhaps, prefer, the longer, gracious and heartfelt writes, that makes them so uniquely, C(h)ris(p) xxx
Oh Anni G Gently I know what you mean but I think in some ways I prefer the former comment. but I am glad you like the poem, I am sort of intersted in what you’ve done with my name C(h)ris(p) makes it look like a civil service reference. But more historically no one has called me crisp since my mate brian at school :)))
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