Long gone, the grifters and cowboys and dealers
Their gleaming chrome life had to die down
And now you’re dead too
(quietly turning over in my heart)
Unable to feel the choke of fingers around your own
Unable to make up for the weight that you lost
Unable to accept that this,
was all you.
Eyes closed, hand pressed palm to palm.
If you ever went to church you’d know;
God has nothing to do with this.
Comments
great writing
Powerful!
it was
– Chlobot
I love this, it’s so gritty and sweet :)
thankyou very much.
– Chlobot
read more o’hara
and i will read more you
I love the realism in it all !PG$ baby
Oh wow. I love this.
I love how it tells a story
and I love how well you tell it