Making Love (explicit language warning)

we made love that night – for the first time…

unclothed, bare, in his arms
i wanted to reach for that which is ‘beyond’…

Instead, i got that which was barely even here, now.

I wanted my soul to transcend
me, him, them,who,there,here,all, this.

To meet him, in that place of Blessed Union.

Instead, he sucked at my tit,
massaged my clit,
and introduced me to his dick.

his expert technique,
his practised hands,
his beautiful, soft, lips kissing me
gently, here, there, everywhere….

I yielded to him completely,
knowing that in true surrender,
lay Divinity,
lay Love…

I searched his pale eyes above mine,
for that same spark, that same knowledge, that same surrender,

instead i saw his lust and … no more.

I loved him.
He fucked me.

- Chitrali, 16/02/2010

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sometimes, 2 people can be in the most intimate of places together and yet have completely different experiences!…
yes, another gem from my re/ship – sorry, it won’t be quiet tonight for some reason…

Apologies for the explicit language.

April ’10 update: 124 views & 5 faves…thank you!..:)..

x chitrali


  • S .
    S .over 4 years ago

  • thank you so much Shoaib!!…I’m thrilled by the feature!!.:):) made my day today in what’s shaping up to be a tough week, so a bit thank you!…:)..xx chitrali

    – chitrali

  • that was ‘big’ thank you, not ‘bit’!…x chitrali

    – chitrali

  • en-joy
    en-joyover 4 years ago

    I believe that this is reality or a lot of people around the world!

  • hiya En-joy, too true, unfortunately…wish it weren’t so, but it is…ah well c’est la vie, eh? – thanks for stopping by and taking a look…:)…xx chitrali…

    – chitrali

  • Matt H.
    Matt H.over 4 years ago

    Oh man…wow. Just, wow. Intense, Chitrali.

  • thank you Matt…i’m glad i can induce a “wow”…as a writer, that sorta reaction is high praise…:):)…thanks for reading and i’m glad you like…xx chitrali..

    – chitrali

  • pix83
    pix83over 4 years ago

    I really felt your disappointment in this one! The verses juxtaposed like that really did it for me

  • hiya pix – long time no see, how’re you?…
    yeah, except it wasn’t the physical but the emotional disappointment…:)…glad you could stop by, thanks for the read..:)..xx chitrali

    – chitrali

  • pagan
    paganover 4 years ago

    powerful words sister… i actually found the language quite appropriate considering the topic ;-)

  • gretchen, thank you my friend…:):)…i’m glad you could visit….lol, thanks, just wasn’t sure on the ‘language rating’ coz i’m usually not someone who drops expletives all the way through their coversations!…(or be this explicit either, but anyways – as i said, it wouldn’t go away last night)….thank you for reading..xx chitrali

    – chitrali

  • pix83
    pix83over 4 years ago

    I’m doing fine, just a tad busier than I would like! I get so motivated to sit down and write when I read great stuff like your poem above!!

  • hiya pix – what a lovely thing to say – thank you and hope you can get the time to write again soon – i’d love to read a lot more of your stuff…:):)…xx chitrali..

    – chitrali

  • RaOrEmraeh
    RaOrEmraehover 4 years ago

    It’s not always like this, but we all know men and women connect in different ways. Sorry to hear your disappointment in this writing. it’s all said well and I don’t think there’s anything offensive to apologize for.

  • hey cass, thanks..yeh, they do, and that’s what i told myself and stayed for 4 years after that!(d-uh, eh?)…lol…ah well, a life-lesson, well-learnt…:)…thank you for your kind words (& the fave), they do mean a lot to me…xx chitrali

    – chitrali

  • Cathal .
    Cathal .over 4 years ago

    Wow !!! I’m blown away by the perfect use of the perfect words in this piece ! Isn’t it amazing how a certain word just conveys so many thoughts and emotions about a scene or a sense. This is fantastic and an excellent portrayal of when sometimes we are disappointed in what we expect. Well done you !

  • hiya Cathal…’ve just made my weekend! – a “wow” and a “perfect”??…:):):)….coming from you, that means a lot to me, a big thank you!…yeah words’ve always done it for me – especially the written word…all happened a long time ago now, but for some reason, they seem to want to be written now that i’ve gotten back to writing again…i’ll try not to bore people to tears with it for too much longer! so much stopping by…look fwd to your sunday piece today…xx chitrali

    – chitrali

  • rubyjo
    rubyjoover 4 years ago

    sometimes reality sucks

  • hey rubyjo – thanks so much for the feature!…made my day today!…:):)…and yeah, sometimes it does indeed…:)…ah can onlly gget better right?…lol!..xx chitrali

    – chitrali

  • bearwings
    bearwingsover 4 years ago

    nice work , isn’t it grand, mars and venus, love and penis, although I would have thought he could pretend a bit, it does improve the moment more than a little…even a bear knows that

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