A glint, a flash so bright with warmth,
A tide of light, not common, but intense
The light tinged blue tides
wrapped and warming me,
I wait for the summer one.
The summer one
A glint, a flash so bright with warmth,
A tide of light, not common, but intense
The light tinged blue tides
wrapped and warming me,
I wait for the summer one.
hilarydougill, 3 months ago
Do you mean wrapped by any chance? Sorry sweetheart, but I think you need some commas, to make it make sense. It has great words, but I think your mind was working faster than your fingers.
checkma8, 3 months ago
Cheers Nice job1
JOSEPH VALCOUR..., 3 months ago
work fine for me the way it is. the presence of soul is truer than words.
izzymary2, 3 months ago
I don’t understand the first comment Joe I see wrapped quite plainly and like Joe it works for me