You and I...

chazz
Author: chazz
Word Count: 77
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You and I...

The warmth of hugging you in the sun
The softness of your voice in my ear in the gentle breeze
The power of your breath on my skin in the wind
The gentleness of your kiss in the soft rain
The exhilaration of your touch in the torrential downpour
The ecstasy of touching you in the roaring thunder
The frenzy of making love in the intense lightning
The passion of our love in the incessant hurricane

...Us

  • LjMaxx

    LjMaxx

    This is BeAuTiFuL Chazz..

  • chazz replied

    Thank You!!

  • klezedawg

    klezedawg

    wow, you doing some writing too, right on

  • chazz replied

    Thought I’d give it a shot

  • Naylor

    Naylor

    OMG !!!!!!!!!!!! This is increduble !!! For someone who doesn’t write often this blows me away !!!!!
    BEAUTIFUL and so very passionate !!! WRITE ON is right !!! :) (((HUG)))

  • chazz replied

    Thank You!!! This means a lot coming from a passionate writer like yourself…(((((HUGS)))))

    :)

  • Suzanne German

    Suzanne German

    this is deliciously gorgeous!

  • chazz replied

    Thank you very much!!

  • Rachel Counts

    Rachel Counts

    Great writing!!!! =)

  • chazz replied

    Thank You!!

  • Matthew Reed

    Matthew Reed

    brilliant…I guess I knwo why i’m single….”guys like you”! lol great job.

  • chazz replied

    Thank you…and I don’t know about the “guys like me” thing…this is my first attempt at putting anything up like this.

  • webbie

    webbie

    CONGRATS on being featured at All Things Poetic, Prose, Philosophical …Great job :)

  • chazz replied

    Thank You!!

  • Ushna Sardar

    Ushna Sardar

    beautiful done chazz my friend!!! huggles

  • chazz replied

    Thank You!!

  • VelvetGirl

    VelvetGirl

    wow, what a build up from that first hug in the sun …..this is superbly passionate. gotta fave. x

  • chazz replied

    Thank You!!

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