My trenchcoat rustles with each step as I walk the darkened street. Each one flashes bare leg from the tops of my knee high, patent leather boots to the hem of the short vinyl skirt. My scalp itches under the black wig I wear, and I’m scanning the shadows from behind a mask of thick make up and dark shades.
Just another lady of the night, looking for a customer.
Twenty feet ahead of me, a shadow detaches itself from a pool of darkness. There’s the faint animal shine of eyes as he looks in my direction. When I’m closer, he asks, “Are you lonesome tonight?”
“Maybe.”
“How much?” Like all of them, he needs to touch, raising a hand to let one fingertip trace the line of my jaw as I stop in front of him.
“Depends on what you want,” I reply, letting a coy smile curve my lips.
“You, a bed, a few hours,” he smiles back, blue eyes gleaming.
“Few hours, nothing kinky?” At his nod, I tell him, “Two hundred.”
“Done.” He’s drawn very close, smiling down at me.
xxx
A nearby motel provides the bed in a clean, but shabby room. He’s paid for the night, not just a few hours. “Wash the paint from your face,” he tells me as he begins to undress. I step into the bathroom after depositing my coat within easy reach of the bed. He calls quietly, “Leave the boots, but the rest…take it off.”
I follow his orders, and step back into the room in nothing but the boots, to find him sitting on the edge of the bed. The evidence he’s already fed this night juts up eagerly as he stretches a hand towards me. “Come, cara mia.”
He slides back onto the bed, guiding me to straddle his thighs. The taint of blood under the smoke of whisky is faint copper. There’s room, I decide, kneeling over him with one hand on his chest, and I reach for the top of my boot with the other as we kiss.
Inside it, there’s a slender needle of wood with a very sharp tip. I have it halfway out when his hand closes over my wrist, and he chuckles against my lips. “I know who you are, cara mia.”
My mouth goes dry. I depend on distraction to take them out. Vampires are stronger, faster, but so easily led by their lusts, whether for blood or sex. He pulls my hand away from my boot. “I’ve watched you, Hunter. I chose you.”
“Did you?” My voice is a faint rasp, pulse jumping in sudden fear.
“You’re all alone. No one allowed close, no one to love,” he whispers. Another kiss, and I’m on my back under him, trapped, arms stretched above my head, wrists pinned by one large hand. “Like me.”
“I’m not like you.” This is it. I’ve grown too confident, and I’m going to pay the price with my blood and life.
“Cara mia,” he breathes in my ear. “A deal.”
“What sort?” I push away the sudden hope that springs up. Vampires offer only lies.
“A night of love, in return for eternal rest,” he murmurs, brushing a kiss on my cheek. “For a little while, no loneliness for you, and then a peaceful end for me. I’m weary, cara mia.”
“You’re lying.”
“If I were, you’d already be drained or turning,” he replies. The wig is pulled off and tossed away from the bed. “I want an end, but I’m too selfish to want it to come abruptly.”
Another deep, lingering taste of smoke and copper. I can’t help but respond. Vampires are sensuality incarnate. “Suicide.”
“Peace, at the hands of one I’ve done no harm to,” he agreed. “Do we have a deal, cara mia?”
I still think he’s lying, but I don’t have much choice. I’m trapped, at his mercy. I stare into his blue eyes…and I see it. See the same thing the mirror shows in my own. “Yes.”
xxx
His name is Cristov, and he’s over seven hundred years old. My weapons are laid just out of easy reach as he promises he won’t spill my blood. He’s skilled, and that overwhelming sensuality already has my body burning with need. We make love; he tells me about himself as we rest, then there’s more heat. Hours of it, until we’re both sated and the sky is beginning to gray around the cheap drapes covering the small window.
“Let me sleep,” he asks me, a fearful pleading in his voice. “Let me go to my final rest with the memory of you in my arms, cara mia.”
He’s kept his promise. I nod in response, listening to his heartbeat begin to slow as I lay against him. “Don’t forget me, cara mia. Remember I wasn’t a monster at the end,” he murmurs as he brushes a kiss on my forehead.
“I won’t,” I promise. His heartbeat fades away, his eyes closing as his body goes limp. I’m still as his skin begins cooling against mine. For a little while, I was neither alone or lonely. Cristov gave me the illusion of love.
I sit up. I’ll treasure that, I think.
Reaching across his body for one of the slender stakes, I do what needs to be done.
His dust clings to my face, mixing with the tears I wasn’t aware of shedding.
Promise Keepers
My mysterious vampire hunter returns, once again. Her first appearance was in The Hunt , the second in A Simple Answer
Roy barry, 4 months ago
Amazing, thank you.
Empress, 4 months ago
cheat. still no name.
Did wonder if she was going to go through with it at the end … like her so much better because she did.
Gayla Drummond in reply to Empress’s comment, 4 months ago
Well, the next one up will be how she became aware of vampires in the first place. I’m halfway done with it. She says Constance is okay, lol. So, we’ll call her Connie.
Empress, 4 months ago
hurray! i like the “con” syllable in the name seeing as that’s part of her MO
Gayla Drummond in reply to Empress’s comment, 4 months ago
Good point, lol.
Damian, 3 months ago
Wonderful Gayla. I know she’s a hunter, but I hoped she still wouldn’t go through with it in the end. I can’t help it though, I’m always on their side ;)
Gayla Drummond in reply to Damian’s comment, 3 months ago
Who knows? Maybe she’ll have to team up with one in order to get rid of the Connoisseur vamp! LOL
Damian, 3 months ago
Maybe; although she doesn’t seem like she’s up for a vamp partner.
I really liked this, and maybe Kate’s right, if Connie hadn’t have gone through with it, the story would have suffered. :)
greenbeards, 3 months ago
Wow, now I know why vampires were always my favorite. Loved the rhythm and sacrifice at the end. Very good…
Gayla Drummond in reply to greenbeards’s comment, 3 months ago
Thank you! =) Connie’s proving to be an interesting character to get to know, lol.
Ruth Anne McCa..., 3 months ago
Awsome piece. I enjoyed it very much!!
Thomas Josiah ..., 3 months ago
Great story
Gayla Drummond in reply to Ruth Anne McCauley’s comment, 3 months ago
Thank you! =)
Gayla Drummond in reply to Thomas Josiah Chappelle’s comment, 3 months ago
Hey, thanks! =)
Alix Purcell, 3 months ago
Gayla, this is a great piece. Well done!
Gayla Drummond in reply to Alix Purcell’s comment, 3 months ago
Thanks, Alix! =)
INcreations, 3 months ago
That is alot to read but worth it , great stuff.
Gayla Drummond in reply to INcreations’s comment, 3 months ago
Thank you! I appreciate you taking the time to do so. =)
daydreamer, 3 months ago
very nice…interesting but nice..keep it up i’d like to read more of your pieces..
missheels, 3 months ago
Well written, I will look out for more of your masterpieces. Thanks
hazem02, 3 months ago
great stunning write …
hazem
Gayla Drummond in reply to daydreamer’s comment, 3 months ago
I gots series! LOL…be glad to see you pop up again. =)
Gayla Drummond in reply to missheels’s comment, 3 months ago
Thank you for taking the time to read! =)
Gayla Drummond in reply to hazem02’s comment, 3 months ago
Thank you! =)
alanrener, 3 months ago
very nice
congrats
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Gayla Drummond in reply to alanrener’s comment, 3 months ago
Thanks! =)
Crowmanic, 3 months ago
I came across this several days ago, and finally got back to it, to fav, and say well written. I enjoyed this for some obtuse reason beyond my grasp. Thx for the sharing …
Gayla Drummond in reply to Crowmanic’s comment, 3 months ago
Quite welcome, and thank you! =)
Timothy Goodwin, about 1 month ago
Exemplary presentation!! Well-crafted, fluid, wondrous imagery of imagination!!