cool new strip! my only crits are the floor/wall colors… it would’ve looked better if they were different colors, rather than different shades… also, his face in panel 3 seems a little odd… i know the expression you’re trying to convey, but i think this style makes it more difficult to do that… love the mr saturn, though! keep up the great work =D…
Right on man, Yea i agree with the bg comment now that i come back to it. And that expression in panel 3 was kinda hard, I shoulda went in front of a mirror or something haha. Thanks for the comment and the honest critique, i really appreciate it.
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cool new strip! my only crits are the floor/wall colors… it would’ve looked better if they were different colors, rather than different shades… also, his face in panel 3 seems a little odd… i know the expression you’re trying to convey, but i think this style makes it more difficult to do that… love the mr saturn, though! keep up the great work =D…
Right on man, Yea i agree with the bg comment now that i come back to it. And that expression in panel 3 was kinda hard, I shoulda went in front of a mirror or something haha. Thanks for the comment and the honest critique, i really appreciate it.
– Cgoose
Unique style. Love that “Hmmm?” expression!