i will miss you when you're gone

Christopher  Ewing
Author: Christopher Ewing
Word Count: 528
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i will miss you when you're gone

Dont ever assume your closest friend always knows how you feel.
Tell them before you lose that chance
Dont know why I was compeled to write this. Just felt she should know.

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so many people have come into my life
so many have made promises that werent kept
every person i have met has made a impact on me
helping me create the person i am today

when i met you a few years ago
we both had the same goal in mind
little did i know then
how important the role you would play

you are probably the only person in this world
who has truely believed in me
helped me, supported me with nothing expected in return

we both know when i have screwed up
rather then you leave me hanging
you have always been there with supporting words
me knowing what you really meant
but within your caring way you reassured me
my screw up was going to be ok

you have been the only one to see the potential i have
you have been the only one to just help without a word
you put the tools in my hand to improve and grow
coaching me along the way

so many promised things they didnt keep
so many just wanted to use the alledged talent i possess
you have been the only one who just did it
helped me with nothing asked in return

i have admired you for years
i know what type of friend i have in you
it’s the best feeling in the world to know
i can turn to you, and you know you can turn to me
and there isnt anything expected from either
just a friendship to hold dear

even when i say thank you
for all you have done for me
i can hear the awkwardness in your voice
telling me it’s ok

i would give anything for us to be closer
so many times ive wanted to call
say cmon lets go, there’s shooting to be done

as i wipe the tears from my face
knowing the loss one day to come
i know deep in my heart
there wont ever be anyone who can take your place

you might wonder why i write this now
but i needed you to know
before God takes his best angel up above
how much you are respected and loved

when we lose those special people in our lives
so many times we wish we had the time to tell them just as we feel
what better time then the present
then to show our love and dedication while they are still here

you are my guardian angel
you gave me something i have always needed in my life
the support of what i am capable of
you have made me confident and strong
you have helped me in ways so many have promised to do
not asking for anything in return

i am sure im not alone
with the honor that i feel
you have helped so many
and im sure they feel the way i do

so i felt this needed to be written
just so you know
that when it comes that time
when i have to face life without you and move on

i will miss you when you’re gone

©Christopher Ewing 2009

  • Joyce Dickens, IPA

    Joyce Dickens,...

    Beautiful and heartfelt writing Chris…...well done; I love it! JD

  • H M Bascom

    H M Bascom

    What a wonderful friend you have, and she is fortunate to have you.

  • Clive

    Clive

    Great, powerful and meaningful words Chris, beautiful writing my friend.
    Happy Easter to you and yours

  • Zoraida Pesante

    Zoraida Pesante

    Beautifully written!!! You are both very lucky!! God Bless you both!

  • Adam Bykowski

    Adam Bykowski

    Tremendous tribute Chris. This will probably touch this person to tears when reading this. Not sure if this is for your wife, girlfriend, or just friend, but you did a wonderful job with words here. Take care and I wish you the best on your difficulties in the near future.

  • Glenda  Remaklus

    Glenda Remaklus

    Beautiful Chris …... there is a short prayer verse that this reminds me of. (Say it while you can) is the essence of the verse. I cannot remember it right now …. only small parts of it but what it is saying is to tell people that you love them while they are still here. You are saying this and letting them know what an impact they have made. ( gorgeous)

  • Earhart Chappel Inc.   IPA

    Earhart Chappe...

    so well spoken, thoughts rush to one i feel the same for, thank you-c

  • Jellybean720

    Jellybean720

    Very well said.. What a Great Friend this must be :))

  • Troy W. Smith

    Troy W. Smith

    Awesome, I agree. You should always let the ones you know and love, just how you feel. Great job.

  • lorilee

    lorilee

    This is truly beautiful – cried myself through it – very touching!!

  • Jan Piller

    Jan Piller

    Good to follow your intuition Chris… this is beautiful.

  • Scott  d'Almeida

    Scott d'Almeida

    great words;

  • dc witmer

    dc witmer

    you only get one chance to say how you feel for the ‘last time’, and since you can’t predict the ‘last time’, then make all the times the ‘last time’
    kinda the same thing as ‘you don’t know what you got until it’s gone’ Cinderella
    well written my friend

  • Bonnie T.  Barry

    Bonnie T. Barry

    From deep in your heart, Chris; no friend could ask for a more sincere tribute. Bless you for writing this. And bless the good soul to whom it is addressed!

  • Wendy  Slee

    Wendy Slee

    In reaching out to another, and illuminating their beautiful heart, you have shown us yours….
    Bless you, and your wonderful friend, and the connection you share….
    and may this blessing grow and touch others, as it already has done here….
    xx

  • Neophytos

    Neophytos

    So much Maturity in your magnificent writing Chris ,and so much understanding about the human spirit ,I really felt I Knew the person you were writing about ,”they are such a special people ” to say I shed a tear is an understatement …!!! Thank you for a Beautiful Poem,and I hope you don’t mind if I copied it so I can read it again ..and again ..!!

  • Joanne  Bradley

    Joanne Bradley

    Sometimes this happens in life, not everyone is intended to stay throughout our lifetime, but they swing in, to help us resolve or learn the things we need to, and then move on as we do for others as well. It’s all part of destiny, isn’t it? I think you captured the whole essence of this with your poem Christopher and in a very moving way! There is a wonderful expression of gratitude and recognition in your words! Beautifully said….

  • Sheryl Kasper

    Sheryl Kasper

    Such beautiful, moving words for a special someone. What a wonderful friendship! :)

  • dawndavies

    dawndavies

    fabulously written,dawnx

  • shiraz

    shiraz

    Beautiful writing….......!

  • Christine Amstutz

    Christine Amstutz

    Christopher, what deeply felt words, what great, unforgettable thoughts, what a tribute to the person in your life. May your words echo within you for all times, once this person has left our world. May he/she live within you and allow you to connect whenever you need the closeness of his/her being. Life continues in some form … it is up to us to decide which one of those forms we choose. I am convinced you will find yours! I wish you this with all my heart!

  • Katrina De'Vries

    Katrina De'Vries

    Very touching and well written.

  • KatsEye

    KatsEye

    This is so beautiful and what a wonderful way to show someone how you care and love them. Just perfect. She is a very lucky lady indeed.

  • Marianne  Venegoni

    Marianne Vene...

    Very beautiful Christopher! Wonderful words from a pure heart are worth more than gold, I’m lost for words but know this, I’m lucky to have you as my friend.

  • Leta Davenport

    Leta Davenport

    Chris, you have totally out done yourself with this one. Wow touches the heart for sure great work my pal! Leta

  • PrairieRose

    PrairieRose

    Dear Christopher,
    Such beautiful words from the heart …..... you are such a beautiful man with a soul of an angel…..
    I love your words so very much…........your special friend is most fortunate to know how you feel…..
    Thank you kindly for sharing your intimate feelings with us…........
    Sincerely, Rose xxoo

  • Jan Timmons

    Jan Timmons

    Lovely thoughts and words, Christopher. I agree that it’s important to let our loved ones know now how much we love and value them.

  • loramae

    loramae

    I know that this melted her heart and soaked those eyes…cause it did mine. I hope any one who is blessed to read these precious thoughts, will be inspired to tell someone, hold someone, touch someone. God Bless your sweet sweet soul Chris :O)

  • Al Bourassa

    Al Bourassa

    WOW again

  • Wanda Raines

    Wanda Raines

    Beautiful heart felt feelings and words.

  • Karin  Taylor

    Karin Taylorcommunity helper

    this was beautiful Christopher, thank you for sharing your writing here. It would be appropriate for just about anyone you love….although i think it came from a personal tribute to someone you love…..but it’s beautiful how it could apply beyond that to someone i love……thank you :)

  • Scott  d'Almeida

    Scott d'Almeida

    great words excellent ;

  • Astoreth

    Astoreth

    Beautiful Christopher….the best friends are he ones who expect nothing in return and love you just for who you are…..and they stay with you even after they are gone. xx

  • jacqleen

    jacqleen

    You are so gifted and honest…...and truly a RICH man …for having a TRUE FRIEND….AND that you appriciate HER for all that she is while she is still with you…....so many Only Appriciate and See the Real True Friends for who they were or what they always gave….way AFTER they are no longer around, NEVER appriciate or be THANKFUL to those that meant so much to them….but NOT YOU….YOU ARE A LUCKY GUY and did I mention TALENTED :))) Very NICE Writing to a very special FRIEND who I’m sure will TREASURE THIS FOREVER!!!

  • Impassioned

    Impassioned

    Beautiful!

  • Astoreth

    Astoreth

    Oh yes….and it made me cry so I am sure it touched her deeply. xxxx

  • Ellen

    Ellen

    Very beautiful!

  • Gail Bridger

    Gail Bridger

    Overwhelming
    You have a great heart Christopher Ewing and an awesome artist!!

  • Margaret  Shark

    Margaret Shark

    Oh my, how blessed you both are.

  • Sheila  Pasket

    Sheila Pasket

    STUNNING…..just gorgeous!! I am glad that I stumbled across your work.

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