functionalism 36 No laughter with the planet’s life
no laughter with the planet’s life
gives you your illusive right
to eat and too consume you’re doomed
to live unto the falling
sky
of why you do not harvest waist
and why you harm to save a face
that looks like your amazing grace
but really kills some others
place
in time and space to be like you
and grow to harvest what’s not true
and how repeating you can’t grow
will only leave the children
woe
© Copyright January 11th, 2011 C.C. Arshagra
Comments
its really a great piece C.C!
Dear wonderful and beautiful one i send you a thousand thank you hugs and x
– C.C. Arshagra
great poem…you are a great poet…awesome
My humble head bows to you for your kind words … and as will be you through the falls of age my young friend!
Thank you troader!The growing soul never ends.
– C.C. Arshagra
C.C., such an intriguing and wonderful write. I love and embrace the “Stream of Linear Poetic Conscious.” I’ve often thought about writing in this fashion myself. You make your thoughts and words pop off the page and into the reader’s mind. Obviously, I must give your other similiar writes some proper time and attention. Peace and love be with you always…Cheers!, Lisa =) XO
oh lisa, Thank you, thank you & thank you! This series is really a live experiment of wonder into the unknown realms of writing free. It is the first time in my life I have ever shared the naked work behind my writing process of growth and creative discoveries. Every comment and fav is so priceless. xoxoxo
– C.C. Arshagra
Congratulations…great words!
When I read your work, I really feel it. You touch the heart
Great feature! There a couple of directions I could take this piece…
Bold and intelligent ,
forceful pointer …amazing grace …doer can not complain !
" why you harm to save a face "
I am always sure am doing harm and I plan my ‘saving grace’ before hand !
sad …
congratulations on your feature
great write, thought-provoking