hello one dies where no one lived
through kingdoms of our functions give
to dawn the choice of being here
alone to end the warring
is
a choice to take the air for free
and roll the die is all ’bout me
oh my what weapons do we keep
when powers trick fears’ hate-felt
reep
because the news said oh not you
now blame the all of others too
and close your minds and eyes to crime
and buy how lies and history
rhyme
© Copyright January 11th, 2011 C.C. Arshagra
Comments
I am who I am no verse no prose
my deeds I spelleth all through
None sees heaven none knoweth hell !
The moment am gone form mine left
Pious Good or Evil am akin insect !
Dear Charan, I believe i have had to fortune to befriend you long enough to truly understand how your poem as comment here is a true reflection of your understanding read. A beautiful reed flute you play here. You must post this as a poem on your page! Please do link to this as an honor to the depth of your mind’s listen. So many ways to hear art. i applaud your gift unique!
– C.C. Arshagra
This is incredible and powerful
oh my what weapons do we keep
when powers trick fears’ hate-felt
reep.
Another great one.
oh not you
now blame the all of others too
I keep rereading this ….this line could be about so many …very thought provoking write…
nice write, must go check the others now.
C.C., such an emotional, powerful and thought provoking piece of written artistry. Peace and love be with you always…Cheers!, Lisa =) XO
My friend this is in reference to your response to my comment above !
I feel humbled …in fact I said somewhere , I was not even aware I made my first poem until 6 years later when my daughter read the lines ..and asked me …Chacha can I have a copy of this poem !
Your appreciation touched me …I shall post this poem …but I really dont know to prepare the link ..computer came to me…and quiet late !
An amazing, beautiful, and (most) very tender and wonderful story you share.
And I did not ever hear the word chacha before as" dad’ daddy" or “Father”; very cool Chacha! Did you know “The Cha Cha” is a name for a dance in America? Goggle it on youtube! I’m sure there must be a video of it. thanks, i love learning though the gift of your living cultural insights that are so unique to my exposure. And too the universal beauty found within!
– C.C. Arshagra