each last moment of you with one is
always waiting in the leave of hang time
to be exactly older than no time expired
between the past and eternity now again here
you are and so too you were and yet
your sense of being older and wiser is
flashing into presence and questioning the fall of time
all around the full naked changes now undressed
to see or not your controls fear’s holding thoughts
as deeds done like a conscious act
that fooled not you at all or honestly anyone’s soul being
by the wake of your own soul’s hands doing
the dance of primal motivations truly premeditative and still
again here you are all changed in the throw of reminders
here again to see the memories and maturity
you thought yourself to have evolved on from
each last moment of you with one and yet death has still to know
what does in fact transpire through life
as in yesterday’s wait of soul attending
the trials of coming home to ask the opinion
you have formed of yourself to prove itself sustained
in the ever-childhood of becoming age
always
© Copyright November 6th/7th, 2010 (as daylight savings time falls back) C.C. Arshagra
Comments
exceptional writing C.C! throughly enjoyed it reading!
I do love writing these new ‘functional’ poems UShna.
I own the inspiration of this series to you, your group, and your beautiful soul’s walk into the work of my life.
– C.C. Arshagra
great writing
Thank you Boo, your my most loyal friend the series here!
! It turely moves my deepest respect for your time here!
– C.C. Arshagra
I have always found it to be fascinating that we can track the progress of others toward success or failure so easily. We watch their actions, read their words, and say to ourselves, There he/she goes toward self destruction or This person will succeed despite all odds Yet they can not see the path beneath their own feet. Curious.
Well written and thought provoking.
Again Helen! I so value your comment’s insightful depth within your insightful readings of these works. A huge gift to me, the feedback on this series is very important, since the writing is so experimental. big hug, thank YOU!
– C.C. Arshagra
in the search of self……can one finally know one’s soul’s destiny…..is one brave enough to face the honesty of deeds done…..face death head on and be clear enough in heart and soul to render death a harmless act and time merely a passing thought…..perhaps in our quest to find our true natures we forfeit the simplicity and purity of it. This had me swirling CC…..precisely why I loved it.
Wow Cosimo! Grand Slam! Home Run! Game Over with your words “be clear enough in heart and soul to render death a harmless act and time merely a passing thought” Wow! Wow! Wow! Wow! Wow! Wow! Wow! Wow! Wow!
– C.C. Arshagra