A Model Woman
So gentle, strong, and alive into the present.
I can hear her and she is listening.
“Do you know the time of love?” She spoke
And moved my mind breathing way
“I see you dreaming about the music of hope.”
She whispered this into my fears now falling
“Why are you dying to doubt yourself so?”
Her lips did not move as the air shook my soul.
She was never going to leave me.
She was never going to stay.
She would never say ‘I love you baby’
She waited for my tears exposed
Some astral freedom was a gift that she gave
And all I could do here, in return, was this …
Share in her soft presence play
Her laugh washing me
far beyond my mortal way
My jaded limitations
She was not to be captured,
She was not to be caught
She could not be possessed
by me, nor any moment held
The canvas alone could here
only thank her
For simply being here
For simpliy becoming herself
© Copyright 2008 C.C. Arshagra
A Model Woman by C.C. Arshagra
Based on and Inspired By model Anastasia By artist Jarmo Korhonenk
ALSO: SEE & READ A Model Woman II
Acrylic and pastels on canvas
Comments
CC,
Your writing gets more “soul-kissed” and “breathable” as each day goes by. A pleasure to read with or without vanity. Thank you for shining your light for all to see.
WWPWD?
XO
wonderful writing, cheers
Thank you Kym Breeze, Wait a muinute … I’m getting a vission ,,,, Yes …yes … Ok. Kym, you must go to Jarko’s page and thank him with all your heart for being the source of this—mere flower that was born of such a seed.
– C.C. Arshagra
YOU SURE PUT IN WORDS A INCREDABLE FEELING HARD TO SAY ,WHEN WE JUST CAN’T HAVE THE LOVE OF OUR LIFE,WAITING AND SLOWLY DYING FOR HIM OR HER ,BEAUTIFUL .
I know I’ve been away for some time, but your art and inspiration has never left my love.
– C.C. Arshagra
Oh I know this woman! I meet her every time I fall in love – my inamorata – wonderful, wonderful poetry!
Don’t stop falling Kafka. A most fortunate loss to have! Every time! Ouch. Thank you!
When she sees you there on the ground .. look at her again ? The depth of it—ooh!
I love woman.
– C.C. Arshagra
Thank you C.C.! I’m speechless! That is the best thank I can get. My feet are so high off the ground now! :-)
Oh Jarko!
Land! You have art to create! You can not become art without a body
of work! Land My Friend. Land! Directly on top if her would be fine.
Close enough to hear her naked mind softly laughing? That would be even better.
– C.C. Arshagra
C.C. Absolutely incredible. Sally
Thank you Sally, and Write On!
– C.C. Arshagra
Absolutely fantastic CC. Thanks for the reminder’s… lol
Thank You Leon, I’m truly grateful for you comment and humor!
– C.C. Arshagra
How on earth did I miss this one???
I love the ephemeral quality you convey in the way the words flow … like catching a moonbeam!
Thank you a million times over pijinlane. You can now LISTEN to this and many other poems here.
Click on the LISTEN To C.C. READ THIS POEM link.
– C.C. Arshagra
Awesome!!
Thank you Susan, Some of my work here gets lost and forgotten down the list. Happy I dusted this one off when I found your group. She breathes again, at least for you!
– C.C. Arshagra
wow…I’m at a loss for words….all I can say is that was beautiful and deserves every feature it gets….so congrats!…you deserve it for this!
Thank you dear one Janae. I hope to find the time to visit you soon. I feel that I have found the soul of your comment’s words after all.
– C.C. Arshagra