Inhale!
Completely inspired by the photograph Apres Brunch By RedBubble’s Judith Oppenheimer
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A poem from “The Integrity of Erotic Poetry” collection & series (Unpublished Work)
Submitted for publication to “In The Moment”:http://www.redbubble.com/groups/in-the-moment Group
LISTEN TO C.C. READ This poem here
A NOTE FROM THE POET:
I thank you all for reading this poem!
The moments you (may graciously choose to) take to comment truly matter.
I am so grateful to those who favorite the work (especially because it a written work)
May I ask you to PLEASE READ MORE THAN ONE POEM
See Journal section of my RB page here for a list of short poems / Words Count listed
Please further note that there is a vast spectrum of subjects, issues, and levels of intensity.
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That she is actually clothed
She’s not! My bones and cells know this.
She’s naked! It’s a fact.
She is burning me. She is doing nothing.
I am awed with deep respect.
I’m going
to die now,
just
to be wind
And become her next breath.
Mariam Muradian
This piece is like the crescendo of the symphony….and the crash of the cymbals and the kettle drums roar! A wonderful writing of pure emotion! So enjoyable! I gasped that ‘next breath’ when I came upon those very words at the end.
I am a big fan.
WWPWD?
XO
C.C. Arshagra
Die! Love! Become alive!
Thank you MM …you Artsy Woman You. Did you see the photo it came from?
See description info!
Mariam Muradian
I am developing a system, Mr. Arshagra. A mutually beneficial system….I hope you will agree.
Privvy to details after the fact.
Am pleased by your response. Will modify my fan-based system accordingly.
WWPWD?
XO
Jen Whyte
Oh, wow … hot, hot writing … makes you view the image with a different eye!
C.C. Arshagra
Thank you Jen, It really happened. I just loved it.
shaytay
I hope you don’t mind me posting your inspiration here….
And I think it’s fantastic writing!:)
C.C. Arshagra
Not at all Denny, Stiil green on the tech side of working the bubble maker.
And thanks for the support.
micmac
This piece is fantastic ,i love Judith’s work she is so real and simple and you are so romantic «to become wind and become her next breath.I think ,like you ,that image is very sensual .
Judith Oppenhe...
its a beautiful piece, and i am so touched for my art to be its inspiration. what a lovely connection to make, thank you.
Kym Breeze
wonderful writing, and a great image…..she is burning me….she is doing nothing….wow…well done.
kafka
...’And become her next breath’....all of the world’s love in just five words – you are a master CC, I am speechless again!
C.C. Arshagra
Thank you Kym and Kafka. I love to hear what words or lines move different artists in different ways. A truly significant joy to receive!
Paul (Quixote)...
This is excellent, C.C. It says it so true. Sometimes we are so nypnotized by what we see, even in our minds that we can walk true fire and not feel the heat as it burns us through and through.
C.C. Arshagra
That’s poetry Paul! Said true through the surface of words breathing so much more. Thank you.
Sally Omar
C.C. This is beautiful…so emotional. Sally
C.C. Arshagra
Thank you Sally, Hope you go to see Judith’s work too. A True NYC artist.
MissKristy
Indeed..what a wonderful combination of words and image..it is something special.
C.C. Arshagra replied
Thank you Kristy “something special” Lee
Leon Walker
Magnificent!!! Takes your breath away… well, I guess that’s the point.
C.C. Arshagra replied
Thanks Leon, Breathe on!
anaisnais
Dreams of desire and well heated verse, whew!
C.C. Arshagra replied
Thanks anaisnais, Are you literally stoked by this? (One of those smiley things here)
Maxine Milne
love….theres this feeling it gives off, like you could close your eyes and sense everything, the way a heart feels in this situation.
C.C. Arshagra replied
Thank you Maxine, so beautiful to hear from the listening gift of your heart.
LocoCow
Awesome Ode to the sweetest of loves desires to become one
C.C. Arshagra replied
Thank you LocoCow, Yes! One can share the sweetness of loves desires
lillyz12
this is really a wonderful, inspriational writing
C.C. Arshagra replied
And so inspiration lives and gives. Thank you lillyz12 for receiving the wonder.
davey lennox
excellent i just wish i could write like that but i cant find …......the words lol
C.C. Arshagra replied
You don’t find them daveythepict as much as you let the be found. You are the living discovery always. Thank you.
Caroline Evans...
Bethoven’s 6th symphony!
C.C. Arshagra replied
Thank you caroline. Thanks for the ear of your soul and the way it can transcribe the song of words into emotional notes that speak to you
Karen01
once, in a time that had no walls, i breathed a soul like you..
when i exhaled, there was the world..
we knew.
C.C. Arshagra replied
Exquisite comment. It need quotes like this
“once, in a time that had no walls, i breathed a soul like you..
when i exhaled, there was the world..
we knew” ~ by (RB artist) Karen01
for it is a poem excerpt by you, or it is a poem by you now.
Thank you Karen
Brandyss Adams
very intricate poem…love how it made me feel…intricate with meaning..loved it
helene ruiz
wow…excellent
hsien-ku
just beautiful