Breathe now for the last breath is gone

C.C. Arshagra
Author: C.C. Arshagra
Word Count: 200
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Rock-a-bye-on-you
Ever-infant child singing

And let the sweet tears
Carry you home

Happy as humility
Sustains and falls onto its knees

The soul walks on now
To crawl, fly away. Come.

We are all invited to laugh at Love’s funeral
Celebrate the life of every heartbreak birthing
As the solar plexus sounds mad, sad and maybe even …
And here now are the memories that keep killing you with joy

Forcing you to see hope alive
And choose the light that slaps you in the face
And you still must defecate and urinate all over
Eternal misery and or be happy … I’m not sorry for this

Unless you want Love’s living spirit to die …
Again?
Forever?
Heal, rise, write, and paint and so I ask you picture this

A work of art was once created by you … as you were
And a cycle comes full as its last breath is going now

© Copyright 1/5/2008 C.C. Arshagra
From “The Poetry of Good-bye” series

Breathe now for the last breath is gone

Inspired by Gigi! micmac and her piece “Torn…. somehow, with effortless tears she has inspired a poem, again.

About Torn…. the art work that inspired this poem GiGi writes:

This a double layer of bark and a portrait of my grandaughter Angelica.
size…2928×2346
Birgitta choose the title…thanks again Birgitta I love it.
Before ,a long time ago , they use to capture the moment in paintings.When I did that layer I had the impression to had captured the beautiful face of my Angelica forever.



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A NOTE FROM THE POET:

I thank you all for reading this poem!

The moments you (may graciously choose to) take to comment truly matter.

I am so grateful to those who favorite the work (especially because it a written work)

May I ask you to PLEASE READ MORE THAN ONE POEM
See Journal section of my RB page here for a list of short poems / Words Count listed

Please further note that there is a vast spectrum of subjects, issues, and levels of intensity.



I am EXTREMELY GRATEFUL TO THOSE OF YOU WHO ADD MY WORKING RedBubble Site to YOUR WATCH LIST -
-I feel this is one of the highest complements of respect a visiting RedBubbler can give. This is not to under-estimate how riveted my humility feels with each comment. This expresses the reserve of your taste, and the future value of your time.

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REMEMBER the VISIT The RedBubble Artists and their works of art here. Almost all of my writing are based on and or INSPIRED BY RedBubble Art and Artists. Let my know if any of the links to their sites are not functioning._ (Hot Links)

Breathe now for the last breath is gone belongs to the following groups:

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  • Jen Whyte

    Jen Whyte, 5 months ago

    Why, in the name of all that’s holy has no-one commented on this wonderful piece of writing!!
    Shit! I give up then!!!

  • micmac

    micmac, 5 months ago

    THIS IS SO TOUCHING ,SO REAL AND «PALPABLE» I THANK YOU FROM THE BOTTOM OF MY HEART …Gigi

  • kafka

    kafka, 5 months ago

    CC, I am sitting here in tears – my friend Gigi is the kindest most loving soul here – your words are simply the most moving thing that I have read in years – I totally agree with pjinlane, I am so glad to have found your incredible talent.
    Now, MORE COMMENTS EVERYBODY!!

  • C.C. Arshagra

    C.C. Arshagra, 5 months ago

    Kafka, Thank you again. She seems to have the gift of being art. Art flowing both within her and out of her to the world. Now that’s talent! Too GiGI! And WATER!

  • Pagly2

    Pagly2, 5 months ago

    This made me catch my breath…...so real…so touching…..so raw..and just SO beautiful…...
    THANK YOU…........Thank you…..

  • C.C. Arshagra

    C.C. Arshagra, 5 months ago

    Hi Pagly2, Please extent you breathing to micmac for her breath taking inspiration!

    Thank you.

  • elfevans

    elfevans, 5 months ago

    Poignantly written.

  • C.C. Arshagra

    C.C. Arshagra, 5 months ago

    Thanks you Elf, I am grateful for your words!

  • Sally Omar

    Sally Omar, 5 months ago

    C.C. This takes one’s breath away. Sally

  • Suzanne German

    Suzanne German, 5 months ago

    spectacular artwork – and the words go beautifully – lovely!

  • C.C. Arshagra

    C.C. Arshagra in reply to Suzanne German’s comment, 5 months ago

    Suzanne.
    I thank you from my heart for your comment on the art & the words.
    I’ll share word of your comment to Micmac! I have just recently learned the basics of how to link things. and I still need time to make sure all past writings have been updated.

  • Suzanne German

    Suzanne German in reply to C.C. Arshagra’s comment, 5 months ago

    ah my pleasure – and when you learn perhaps you can teach me LOL – I have not got the hang of it properly yet!

  • micmac

    micmac, 5 months ago

    Arshagra you make me cry ,thanks …big hug …xxx…Gigi…alias…Micmac
    Thanks everybody for all the nice words,I’m so happy.

  • C.C. Arshagra

    C.C. Arshagra in reply to micmac’s comment, 4 months ago

    Oh my god -Happy Tears. The sun shower of human emotions. Life is being moved with wonder. Love to you Gigi

  • C.C. Arshagra

    C.C. Arshagra in reply to Jen Whyte’s comment, 4 months ago

    Hi Pijinlane, Sorry it took so long to thank you for this bold and passionate comment. It is one of the early poem inspired by art on RedBubble. I was so new to this site at the time. Your comment here truly made me laugh out loud. and it is one of my all time favorite comments. Your respect for all the diverse writings I have written and posted here humbles me and gives me faith. Love to you! Love to you and love to you!

  • Jen Whyte

    Jen Whyte, 4 months ago

    Well!!! sheepish grin … makes me angry when real talent is not appreciated but I suppose it would be a very boring world if we all liked the same thing!
    I just like how you use words!!

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