Breathe now for the last breath is gone

Rock-a-bye-on-you
Ever-infant child singing

And let the sweet tears
Carry you home

Happy as humility
Sustains and falls onto its knees

The soul walks on now
To crawl, fly away. Come.

We are all invited to laugh at Love’s funeral
Celebrate the life of every heartbreak birthing
As the solar plexus sounds mad, sad and maybe even …
And here now are the memories that keep killing you with joy

Forcing you to see hope alive
And choose the light that slaps you in the face
And you still must defecate and urinate all over
Eternal misery and or be happy … I’m not sorry for this

Unless you want Love’s living spirit to die …
Again?
Forever?
Heal, rise, write, and paint and so I ask you picture this

A work of art was once created by you … as you were
And a cycle comes full as its last breath is going now

© Copyright 1/5/2008 C.C. Arshagra
From “The Poetry of Good-bye” series


C.C. Arshagra

Breathe now for the last breath is gone by

Inspired by Gigi! micmac and her piece "Torn…. somehow, with effortless tears she has inspired a poem, again.

About Torn…. the art work that inspired this poem GiGi writes:

This a double layer of bark and a portrait of my grandaughter Angelica.
size…2928×2346
Birgitta choose the title…thanks again Birgitta I love it.
Before ,a long time ago , they use to capture the moment in paintings.When I did that layer I had the impression to had captured the beautiful face of my Angelica forever.

See* Journal section of my RB page here for a list of short poems* / Words Count listed
A vast spectrum* of subjects, issues, and levels of intensity.

REMEMBER the VISIT The RedBubble Artists and their works of art here.
Most writings originally posted here on RB are based on and or INSPIRED BY RedBubble Art and Artists.

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Comments

  • pijinlane
    pijinlaneabout 4 years ago

    Why, in the name of all that’s holy has no-one commented on this wonderful piece of writing!!
    Shit! I give up then!!!

  • Hi Pijinlane, Sorry it took so long to thank you for this bold and passionate comment. It is one of the early poem inspired by art on RedBubble. I was so new to this site at the time. Your comment here truly made me laugh out loud. and it is one of my all time favorite comments. Your respect for all the diverse writings I have written and posted here humbles me and gives me faith. Love to you! Love to you and love to you!

    – C.C. Arshagra

  • Gisèle  Bédard
    Gisèle Bédardabout 4 years ago

    THIS IS SO TOUCHING ,SO REAL AND «PALPABLE» I THANK YOU FROM THE BOTTOM OF MY HEART …Gigi

  • Love you, miss you, and still falling into and over the beauty of your living art.

    – C.C. Arshagra

  • kafka
    kafkaabout 4 years ago

    CC, I am sitting here in tears – my friend Gigi is the kindest most loving soul here – your words are simply the most moving thing that I have read in years – I totally agree with pjinlane, I am so glad to have found your incredible talent.
    Now, MORE COMMENTS EVERYBODY!!

  • Kafka, Thank you again. She seems to have the gift of being art. Art flowing both within her and out of her to the world. Now that’s talent! Too GiGI! And WATER!

    – C.C. Arshagra

  • Pagly2
    Pagly2about 4 years ago

    This made me catch my breath……so real…so touching…..so raw..and just SO beautiful……
    THANK YOU………..Thank you…..

  • Hi Pagly2, Please extent you breathing to micmac for her breath taking inspiration!

    Thank you

    – C.C. Arshagra

  • elfevans
    elfevansabout 4 years ago

    Poignantly written.

  • Sometimes when I write a piece like this one, I so wish to add larels beneith layers that I wonder if anyone would ever return to it and see something within something for the first time. Third time. Etc. Thank you Elf. Sorry I have been away from RB for so long. I am grateful for your words! Be well.

    – C.C. Arshagra

  • Sally Omar
    Sally Omarabout 4 years ago

    C.C. This takes one’s breath away. Sally

  • Suzanne German
    Suzanne Germanabout 4 years ago

    spectacular artwork – and the words go beautifully – lovely!

  • Suzanne. I thank you from my heart for your comment on the art & the words.
    I’ll share word of your comment to Micmac! I have just recently learned the basics of how to link things. and I still need time to make sure all past writings have been updated.

    – C.C. Arshagra

  • ah my pleasure – and when you learn perhaps you can teach me LOL – I have not got the hang of it properly yet!

    – C.C. Arshagra

  • Gisèle  Bédard
    Gisèle Bédardabout 4 years ago

    Arshagra you make me cry ,thanks …big hug …xxx…Gigi…alias…Micmac
    Thanks everybody for all the nice words,I’m so happy.

  • Oh my god -Happy Tears. The sun shower of human emotions. Life is being moved with wonder. Love to you Gigi

    – C.C. Arshagra

  • pijinlane
    pijinlanealmost 4 years ago

    Well!!! sheepish grin … makes me angry when real talent is not appreciated but I suppose it would be a very boring world if we all liked the same thing!
    I just like how you use words!!

  • Robert Elliott
    Robert Elliottover 3 years ago

    beautifully written

  • Thank to Robert Elliot,
    I really do appreciate you read on this view.

    – C.C. Arshagra