*The UnderConscious* (part 4)
And so the subconscious sleeps
& wakes
it its own bed of mysteries
(Somehow somenow undiscovered)
And all about the wholeness of the under within;
Hope and Faith (Un-manipulated) rests
in the tangibility of air,
yet power and hunger
and the keeping of survival
pretend to have dominion over death
and its blessings
© Copyright 2009 C.C. Arshagra
Comments
love this C.C!
i so value you… thanks!
– C.C. Arshagra
Wow…it’s like you captured some quiet essence within each human and the essence that surrounds of space…if that makes sense.
Your thoughtful mindful comment moves my heart, soul, and cellular being’s mind
…if that makes sence.
Thank you erika15!
– C.C. Arshagra
ah! take out “of” in between the words surrounds and space. Sorry :)
YES AND YES TO YOU WRITE ON! don’t be sorry. Imprefection rocks!
Thanks for finding my work and commenting.
It gave me the chance to look at you RB site and oh yes!
i do and feel
—you are your gift here.
– C.C. Arshagra
There is a certain genius to your writing that captures my soul!!! Love this piece!!!! xoxoxo
Thank you Sally,
The word ‘poerty’ is what happens within you, the recipient.
– C.C. Arshagra
love the use of pretend… in this wonderful exploration of intangibles…… great writing…….peace and light…..b
You a fine RB friend butchart,
This poem would suck without the key stone word you keyed in on
to love!
– C.C. Arshagra
Hope and Faith (Un-manipulated) rests !!
a MANTRA!!
Meditate and chant away!
– C.C. Arshagra
All the love love in this world and from the rest of the worlds too to you.
Thank you for the support Ushna
– C.C. Arshagra
i love the place you’re in where you see and say so truly, they PRETEND to have dominion… i have missed your presence… but am back, anew… many blessings, dear dear soul… xxx
Karen, your love is received, tendered, and returned.
– C.C. Arshagra