<<*IMPORTANT: Do not read*>>
This is a beautiful work written by my little sister who is still in high school. She exudes a confidence in her writing that pulls no punches and portrays her as much wiser than her years.
<<*IMPORTANT: Do not read*>> belongs to the following groups:
All Things Poetic, Artistic, Philosophical, Street Photography and Photojournalism and Underground USASong of Myself
By Paige Barker
I am closed eyes and raised arms,
Icarus,
White skin drinking in the sun
My roots are set deep in the soil,
Blue grass,
Blue collar,
Hearts of gold and mercury
My song is an easy one—
Composed and conducted by the wind in my hair,
Ever changing, ever new
I am Niobe’s tears,
Janie’s love,
And Plath’s confession
I hum my song,
A symphony of dynamic and style,
My spirit the marching of soldiers’ feet,
The beating of children’s hearts,
The flutter of lover’s lashes
I am waves and shore,
A syncopated dance of rise and fall
My song is heartbeat and flamenco hips,
Lost and found,
Lost and found
karolina
this is beautiful writing.
Jerry Zhang
People who have not seen this are missing out
N♥RIN ISM♥IL
i would have to agree with notculpable,
this is such a stunning writing, well kept, great imaginations, great idea, great song..
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all the best!!
fillette
This is beautiful, I wish my students wrote as well and with as much depth as your sister.
discrena
I can feel that song, a sign of beautiful music and beautiful words
Christopher Ba... replied
Thanks Discrena, though not my words, my sister is quite a talented young lady and I will gladly accept that compliment for her and pass it along. Cheers.
Marcella Chestnut
Great journey of the senses. She creates sight, sound, touch, rhythm, pathos…
Very nice!
Christopher Ba... replied
I will be sure to share your comments with her. She unfortunately takes after myself: pessimism and introversion.
LeaLoo
wonderful.
Christopher Ba... replied
Great, glad you liked it LeaLoo.