shameless

With you there is no control
merely a cool exterior that hides
the one who dares to dream
of willow trees and swaying happiness
of a connection and pure intentions that seem….

to touch me in places unknown before
the hide away corners I thought to be locked
and buried under countless moments of control.
Here you move me like a morning wind
like the ocean tides that continue to roll….

with eb and flows that contain beauty
in every gentle swell and brutal break
With you time itself moves with grace
and is marked with a surging lightness of being
that will forever leave a powerful trace….

of feeling delicate as silk
yet stronger than any storm
with you there is no norm…

with you
I am
shameless



Comments

  • wigs
    wigsalmost 6 years ago

    beautiful work Catherine…

  • Thank you so much Wigs. I appreciate your visits.

    – cathrinedp

  • kamel
    kamelalmost 6 years ago

    It always like that in love stories…no…

  • As it should be. :-) Thank you for reading and commenting Kamel

    – cathrinedp

  • Erika .
    Erika .almost 6 years ago

    Wow Catherine, what an awesome way to write this emotion.

    “With you time itself moves with grace
    and is marked with a surging lightness of being
    that will forever leave a powerful trace….”

    Your words soft and glide through the heart. Truly beautiful and captivating. Love this poem.

  • And what an amazing comment Erika. Thank you for that. I appreciate your support very much.

    – cathrinedp

  • Astoreth
    Astorethalmost 6 years ago

    ah well….it must be love then….beautiful sweetheart. xxxx

  • :-) Thank you so much Jane. Wishing you light. xx

    – cathrinedp

  • David A. Everitt (aka silverstrummer)
    David A. Everi...almost 6 years ago

    As Jane says it must be love! ……………… If it is I’m so pleased for you!

    “to touch me in places unknown before
    the hide away corners I thought to be locked
    and buried under countless moments of control.
    Here you move me like a morning wind
    like the ocean tides that continue to roll…”

    This must be so special Cat to completly give of onself to another – David

  • Hi David. Haven’t been on the bubble for a while. Looking forward to seeing your new work. :-) Hope you are well? Thank you for the comment. Much appreciated.

    – cathrinedp

  • Cassey
    Casseyalmost 6 years ago

    The opening stanza and last line gave me goose bumps!

  • And you gave me a smile. Thank you Cassey. How are you?

    – cathrinedp

  • Reynaldo
    Reynaldoalmost 6 years ago

    Catherine what a wonderful and powerful writer you are, my dear you are brave and strong willed to write such beautiful and private thoughts, great job sweetheart, keep writing you will be famous some day and I knew you when, great work

  • Speechless right now. You are so kind with your comment. Thank you Reynaldo. I am so very glad you liked this.

    – cathrinedp

  • blackvixen
    blackvixenalmost 6 years ago

    superb writing……i love the way you write… so soft..sweet and beautiful….

  • Thank you :-) I am so glad you found this soft…it was written with exactly that feeling.

    – cathrinedp

  • TheArtistMario
    TheArtistMarioalmost 6 years ago

    I have made many comments about being shameless and I have always felt no one quite understood what I meant…you have expressed it perfectly! Beautiful

  • What a wonderful thing to say. I appreciate it. Thank you for reading and commenting on my attempts. :-)

    – cathrinedp

  • linaji
    linajialmost 6 years ago

    Wonderful feeling…
    with eb and flows that contain beauty
    in every gentle swell and brutal break

    WOW LOVE THESE LINES…

  • Thank you. SO happy you liked this. :-) How are you doing? Looking forward to seeing your new work.

    – cathrinedp

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