when I lay myself down
The endlessly talented Jacky has agreed to link her ethereal image with these words. Thank you my friend. Your art has inspired me in so many ways.xxx
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I will see you in the street
looking only my way
and walking only to me
with a ‘I am here to stay’
maybe one day, maybe then
you will take my hand
and send shivers unto me
with just a gentle exhale
setting my soul finally free
maybe one day, maybe then
we will feel in the now
a too good to be true
a shudder and shake
a letting go inside you
but until then….
I will lie on my bed
close my eyes
and pray
that I find you tonight
in the moments of my dream
where you are mine
and I am yours…
where I can say…
I missed you today
kamel
it’s very kind…and soft…
cathrinedp replied
Thank you kamel, your visits are always greatly appreciated. Yes, it is a soft wish. :-)
Michael Walters
so so so beautiful! your words are an inspiration to me! This is such amazing writing! it speaks like visions! thank you for sharing
cathrinedp replied
WOW, what a compliment!! Thank you SO much Michael, for taking the time to read and leave such an incredible comment.
artyfifi
Beautifully wistful.
cathrinedp replied
Thank you so much. I appreciate you dropping by. :-)
silverstrummer...
Another beautiful verse again from you Cathrine …................ there seems to be no end to your talents, which is good keep them flowing! – David :>))
cathrinedp replied
:-) thank you David. Hope you are well? I appreciate your support and encouragement very much. It is hugely inspiring.
scott allison
fantacstic! i really love this one cat!
cathrinedp replied
Glad you do. You were sort of part of the process of this one, so thank you.
Faith Donovan
How much I can feel it.. ohh God…
Wonderful writing!
cathrinedp replied
What a wonderful compliment. So glad you connected. Thank you for your visit!
David Murphy
Another moment that everyone feels, that we all come across…....
poignantly written, lovingly given…..
an endless talent!!
cathrinedp replied
Thank you David. Yes, I guess we all have those quiet moments of wishing and hoping and knowing that it might never be. But the dreams are beautiful enough to make it worthwhile. You are a very kind soul, I appreciate your encouragement very much.
Shoaib .
wowww this is awesomeee e:)))
cathrinedp replied
Thank you Shoaib, so glad you like!!
Dani Dreyer
Beautiful Cat, really very beautiful!!
cathrinedp replied
Thank you Dani. I appreciate your visit tremendously!
RosaCobos
Not in dreams…..
not.
Walking the pathways of solitude…
meeting new eyes…of solitude…
awaking the energy of the solitude…
Looking for oneself’s reflection….
of the solitude.
Some new morning…
someone will be there…
to mix up the solitude.
Rosa
cathrinedp replied
beautiful words. Thank you for sharing. I appreciate the time you took to read and comment. :-)
poeticgenius
emotional and a great read as always maybe then they’ll be exactly what u want them to and more !PG$ baby
cathrinedp replied
:-) So right you are. Thank you for reading and commenting. I appreciate your visits so much
Jacky
Yes..defenitely goosebumps !! :) xxx
cathrinedp replied
YAY!!!!! And now my day is made. xxx
ArcadiaTempest
The aching in this is somehow balanced by the hope it has as well…...If this is more than a wonderful verse and a part of where you are now…..it also speaks to me of healing.
Heartfelt ….writing that doesn’t hold back. XXXX
cathrinedp replied
Thank you so much. To get such a comment from such an incredibly talented writer as yourself is awesome. I appreciate the time you take to read and comment, so very very much. xx
botticcelli
beautiful …sensitive words…great collab.
cathrinedp replied
thank you Raffael! your visits are so much appreciated. Jacky’s image is sublime and such a perfect fit!
mimi yoon
beautiful longing, cathrine…
i hope you dream beautiful dreams tonight…
xxx
cathrinedp replied
Thank you Mimi. Thank you for your wonderful wish for me. I wish for you sweet dreams too, in your sleep and waking moments. xxx
DanaMS
Beautiful… Maybe one day :)
cathrinedp replied
yes, maybe one day… Thank you so much for your visit. So so much appreciated.
Mel Brackstone
Very beautiful words and what a fabulous image to go with it!!
cathrinedp replied
Thank you for stopping by, always great to see your name. I appreciate your comment so much. Hope you are well?
Mel Brackstone
Thanks so much Cathrine, yes, I’m well and way too busy, and you?
cathrinedp replied
Very very good thank you Mel. Finally have the sun on my skin. Blessed. Take care x
erika15
Wow, this is just amazing! This poem is like wishful thinking, something I tend to do all the time, I can relate to this. Love it!!
cathrinedp replied
Glad you can relate. Wishful thinking…wonderful, yet so dangerous