Panic In Her Eyes
We are often surprised by things around us that aren’t as they appear. Why is that?
The light in her eyes
reflects her surprise
when she wakes up to find freedom gone.
The meaning is clear,
she starts to know fear,
And she know’s that she has nothing on.
Her chest heaves and sighs,
it shows in her eyes,
she’s captured, no getting away.
She knows it’s no dream,
she let’s out a scream,
but no one will hear her this day.
It’s dark in the room,
no sound in the gloom
but the breathing of someone nearby.
Her legs are spread wide
and her arms are both tied.
She feels a hand groping her thigh.
She cries and she begs
and thrashes her legs
as the hand moves up to her groin.
Her shame and her fears
make her burst into tears,
and she fights the hand groping her loins.
She wails and she moans,
she whimpers and groans,
but the hand keeps on fondling her mound.
Her wetness is seen
and it’s all so obscene
as the fingers keep moving around.
To her horror and shame,
she liked it and came,
but couldn’t say that it felt good.
Embarassed and cold,
she sobbed, but was told
that she wanted it, that’s understood.
So he mounted her there
with her legs in the air,
him thrusting into her hot mound.
His motions were fast
and his lust didn’t last.
He came without making a sound.
Her limbs he untied.
Her lust satisfied,
she dressed quick because of the cold.
His expression was funny
as he counted the money,
and “same time next week,” he was told.
JakcTheRipper
I like it Jim, very good!
Jim Hall replied
Thank you for your support. Now, if I could only remember her name! JH
George Yesthal
Great cadence and rhythm. This piece marches unerringly forward like a well trained soldier. Nice twist too.
Jim Hall replied
Thank you, George. I must confess that I was drunk when I wrote it, but I checked, and it meets the standard for consentual sex. As I like to say, “Ain’t love grande?” Drop in any time, George. JH
Ushna Sardar
great read Jim!
Jim Hall replied
Thank you, Ushna. I think there is more of this going on than most will admit! About that, I truly don’t know what to think. Still…JH
George Yesthal
LOL. Do some of my best work that way. My ol’ buddies Jack Daniel and Evan Williams seem to set the creative juices flowing.
Jim Hall replied
Here, here, George! JH
Rhenastarr
Wonderfully writing Jim, alcohol or not, the creative juices were flowing none-the-less.
Jim Hall replied
Please don’t tease the tiger, ma’am! Thanks for reading. I tried to write this with just a touch of, oh I don’t know, moderation, I think. It’s so easy to just pull out all the stops and let the juices flow, but then I’d have to clean up the mess. Wish I could write like George Yesthal. He knows just how far to go. Maybe, one day when I grow up, I can do that! Thanks for reading. JH
Rhenastarr
You should consider adding this to the group Twisted Tales.
Jim Hall replied
Like I said,ma’am. Please don’t tease the tiger. Sometimes i feel that you wish me to write something specific. Drop a bubblemail sometime and i’ll see what i can do. I try to fit in as many categories as i can but it sometimes seems like i am forgetting something. Suggest a direction and i’ll try to give it a go. And as always, please accept my thanks for your interest and your encouragement. Know that they are appreciated. JH
wigs
that was very well written Jim…. a nice twist at the end, nice work
Jim Hall replied
Thank you for the kind words. i had to give some thought to submitting it before i did. I must stay within the guidelines for decency here at RB. But, in the end, I decided that because the words described an act that was, at the end, between consenting adults, I sent it in. Writing at RB is important to me and i don’t want abuse the privilege. I am encouraged by your comment and will probably write other works like this again. The question is when. This work came upon me suddenly, and I had to polish it up a little. Glad you were entertained, and thank you again. Who knows what tomorrow will bring? JH