the journey

butchart
Author: butchart
Word Count: 87
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individual
metaphorical
metaphysical
sexual
spiritual
soulful

so many paths
each one with it’s own twists and turns
and when one path intersects another
i wonder

a respite for the weary
a place to rest your eye
look inward and outward
but choose and go on

one day when i round
a corner
and run into myself
i wonder

will there be enlightenment
or disappointment
time may or may not tell

until then
i will
straighten my shoulders
and put one foot in front of the other

the journey

thoughts outloud

the journey belongs to the following groups:

Complex Simplicity of Art, Gay Themed Art and Writing, Self as Other and WMG
  • jlynn

    jlynn, 7 months ago

    This is perfect!!! Bravo Butch!!

  • butchart

    butchart in reply to jlynn’s comment, 7 months ago

    thanks j…. again…. and again…... and again…...............b

  • dtdesign

    dtdesign, 7 months ago

    Yet another good one .. makes you think … : )

  • butchart

    butchart in reply to dtdesign’s comment, 7 months ago

    ya think? xoxoxox…...b

  • Rachael  Hope

    Rachael Hope, 7 months ago

    I really like the journey this takes me on. It feels like one big thought process! I really like this Thanks for sharing it

  • butchart

    butchart in reply to Rachael Hope’s comment, 7 months ago

    and thank you for sharing yours…... peace and light….......b

  • Rachael  Hope

    Rachael Hope, 7 months ago

    Oh also before I commented I had no idea the title of this was actually “the journey” which is good because i included about it being like a journey in my previous comment, which means this deserves another comment to say well done it translates well as a journey….end transmition

  • butchart

    butchart in reply to Rachael Hope’s comment, 7 months ago

    girl….. take a deep breath…......... :)

  • sweetscent62

    sweetscent62, 7 months ago

    “The Journey” is lovely B : ) I think you are where you need to be….. Wen x

  • Druidstorm

    Druidstorm, 7 months ago

    “Too see ones self and to smile, would be the perfect journey. For then two become one, creating you the key of destiny, go now and unlock the door to forever!” Beautiful words mate!!!...:))

  • butchart

    butchart in reply to sweetscent62’s comment, 7 months ago

    maybe wend… you are very wise…hmmmmmmmmmm….b

  • butchart

    butchart in reply to Druidstorm’s comment, 7 months ago

    followed by beautiful words of your own mate….and indeed you have made me smile….. often…........ peace and light….......b

  • JOSEPH VALCOURT/ MODERNUS PHOTOGRAPHIC ARTWORK

    JOSEPH VALCOUR..., 7 months ago

    I have been there…insightful work

  • shayne2011

    shayne2011, 7 months ago

    “I think you are where you need to be,” everything that happens is supposed to and everyone really is doing their best. I like ‘the journey’ you take us into your mind, butch.

  • butchart

    butchart in reply to shayne2011’s comment, 7 months ago

    it’s laid wide open shayne…please come and have a look around….........b

  • lianne

    lianne, 7 months ago

    this is quite quite wonderful butch! Bravo!

  • butchart

    butchart in reply to lianne’s comment, 7 months ago

    thank you so much lianne….. it was one of those ones that just kinda flows…you know what i mean?

  • lianne

    lianne, 7 months ago

    I do indeed and that’s the way it has to be – it can’t be contrived or even tailored to someone else’s purpose. Well done!

  • butchart

    butchart in reply to lianne’s comment, 7 months ago

    we are kindred spirits….thank you….....b

  • MuscularTeeth

    MuscularTeethMontage Magician, 6 months ago

    ahh yes. i think this too.
    how different would i have been if it was not for a few events in my teenage years..
    i seriously hope there are many alternate universes out there.. i know in at least 2 of them id be dead by now lol..
    and many more id be a proper human being – work 9-5, go home, watch tv, find a nice girl, settle down, buy a house.. think nothing …etc…

  • butchart

    butchart in reply to MuscularTeeth’s comment, 6 months ago

    well in my opinion with those senarios,,, you are right where you are supposed to be…....... and thriving!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • MuscularTeeth

    MuscularTeethMontage Magician, 6 months ago

    perhaps not thriving….
    :)

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