and the rainbow serpent
sang from the mist
guiding the ship’s sail in
fog filled anthems
rose in drifts
one voice
amid the din
the chosen
heard the call
summoning the child
of gentle eyes
and stories
out of the wild
older than life
the tall grass dancer
stands earthened faced
tasting the wind and sky
in bone and ash
a spear held high
casting his return
what’s given can’t be taken
nor what’s taken kept
the journey of the bloodline
flows back into the first
where ancient pools lie waiting
for all who share the thirst
Comments
beautiful poem it has alot of meaning
thanks for taking the time to read my work nancy.. i really appreciate it.. i’m glad you got something from it…….. peace and light…..b
– butchart
Oh but my do I love this piece,
there is a majesty about the life you breathe into your words.
profound work, Butch x
you always say the kindest things… thank you so much lisa… i really do appreciate it… like being visited by RB royalty.. thank you for taking the time…….. love and light…..b
– butchart
WOW ! AS ALWAYS ….xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxto you !
hey you… i’ve missed you so much… are you well? and thank you ..still an angel i see……… much love……b
– butchart
classic as usual….im thinking greek gods, setting forth on a large row boat with a two hundred slaves of men, their muscles glowing from the heat, light, sweat……sorry went some where else
great piece
oh my… i like where you went.. ha..don’t stop…write a poem……….. thanks mate…..b
– butchart
wonderful words butch. I love this piece :)
hey deb.. thanks so much for stopping in.. always a pleasure when you visit my work…… i’m very glad you enjoyed this….. peace and light……..b
– butchart
Mmmm…!
hey my friend… thank you…. i’ve been very busy offline so i am sorry for not getting back with you on your bmail… i will do that tonight… hope your baby is much improved……. b
– butchart
right out of the park….
…and right on to facebook?? ha….. thanks so much erich..and i also appreciate you standing up for us writers in the forums… i just can’t bring myself to enter that fray…….. peace and light friend…..b
– butchart
fabulous b! love this!
hey ushna… thank you and i’m glad you made your way to this one..as i was thinking when i finished it that it was a piece that would speak to you…….. love and light…….b
– butchart
excellent piece again, Butchart, with great depth…
thank you solomon ..so much… always an honour from you as you were one of the first poets who inspired me here on rb…. peace and light…….b
– butchart
both humbled and honored…………xxx…………b
– butchart