astral tapping

here on the fringe
things unravel
threads of time bound to travel
cells collide and worlds divide
chasms open
to the sky
slip through the eye of the needle
stitching dreams
to comet tails
tempestuous journeys
not for the frail
as enchanted memories
attempt to weave
severed hearts upon the sleeves
of falling stars
that mark the path
for those that bend
untieing knots
begin to mend
this fabric of being
this moment
this chance
unveil the tapestry
your cosmic dance

  • Philosophy Lee
  • butchart replied

    that was some video lee… ha….. thanks so much for reading my work…. i hope you are well my friend…...... love and light….....b

  • JenniferB

    JenniferB

    your words have a melody and flow like soft, celestial music. Beautiful writing as always butchart. :)

  • butchart replied

    you always make me smile J… thanks for all your kindness…..... love and light…..b

  • gretchen .

    gretchen .

    I’m with philosophy! What a fabulous reminder to put us back in place with how it really is, and the last two lines are just perfect. :-) love&light B x o

  • butchart replied

    wow.. thanks so much my friend….... i’m glad that this spoke to something in you…this was one that i had trouble knowing when and where to stop… it almost had a mind of it’s own and i had to reign it in…. (hope that makes sense)..so i really appreciate your words…....... love and light right back..:)........b

  • marieangel

    marieangel

    in instant fave so glad I found this one well writen..thought..experienced….;))

  • butchart replied

    thank you so much for your kind words….... it’s always a great feeling to have new visitors to my work…... i’m glad that something in it could speak to you…... peace and light…..b

  • Care

    Care

    love this butch!! : )

  • butchart replied

    hey friend! great to see you here and back on the bubble scene again… thank you so much… i hope you have been well…... write when you can….. love and light….b

  • mklau

    mklau

    Butch your words resonate with me…..thank you for sharing this beauty. Cosmic dance? anyone

  • butchart replied

    with you? anytime my friend…... thank you for your kind words and i’m touched that something in this spoke to you…....... love and light…......b

  • Mel Brackstone

    Mel Brackstone

    Wonderful rhythm b…..just love it :)

  • butchart replied

    ah mel… thanks so much….... i always get a big smile when you visit my work…..... i really appreciate it…..... love and light…....b

  • lianne

    lianne

    Oh Butch this is positively brilliant – so incredibly wonderful. I just adore it (and I’m sending you by email something that probably won’t surprise you after our exchange about Fahrenheit). This paints such glorious pictures in the mind – and the rhythm of it does make one want to join the dance! As always dear heart – your words reach me deep inside to see all the sensitivity with which you write! Love it – love you – always. xox

  • butchart replied

    you always know what to say to make me feel good about what i try and do… thank you my dear friend….. and btw.. got your emails and will reply very soon….. in the meantime… a big yes to synchronicity and souls that are attuned to each other… one of the bigger suprises and mysteries of this life i think…. all my love dearheart…......b

  • walela

    walela

    This is sooooo good!

  • butchart replied

    i’m so honoured you visitied my writing… thank you so much for your kind words…....b

  • Ushna Sardar

    Ushna Sardar

    chasms open
    to the sky
    slip through the eye of the needle
    stitching dreams
    to comet tails
    tempestuous journeys
    not for the frail

    WOW!! great b!

  • butchart replied

    you tapped into the heart of it dear ushna…. thank you so much for seeing it and your kind words….... much love and light…...b

  • erich biemer

    erich biemer

    i think Bill Bojangles Robinson just did a stair dance…..

  • butchart replied

    ha… ya think? thanks so much erich…...... b

  • Cassidy JK (Ra Or Emraeh)

    Cassidy JK (Ra...

    Poetic perfection. Xoxo

  • butchart replied

    big smile…. thank you sweet cass….... means alot…... love and light….b

  • markgb

    markgb

    Instant fav!

  • butchart replied

    thank you so much… i really appreciate your kindness…..... peace and light…...b

  • Cora Wandel

    Cora Wandel

    Excellent!

  • butchart replied

    thank you so much cora… i really appreciate you taking the time to read my work….. i hope you are well….. any news from our friend? peace and light…...b

  • erika15

    erika15

    slip through the eye of the needle
    stitching dreams
    to comet tails

    as enchanted memories
    attempt to weave
    severed hearts upon the sleeves
    of falling stars .....oh wow, your words take me to other worlds – worlds of dream and wonder and fantasy. I felt like I was on some kind of of astral voyage. A sublime voyage where time doesn’t exist.

    Love this. It’s one of those poems I could read over and over, and feel like I’m reading it for the first time. Pure magic, Butch. Definitely one of my favorites.

  • butchart replied

    ah erika… i’m so glad you caught the feeling of this… it means alot that you “got” it…..... thank you so much for your very kind words….. i really appreciate them…... love and light…..b

  • tkrosevear

    tkrosevear

    so very well said and felt B~ ;) you always tap into my soul ♥

  • butchart replied

    what a wonderful thing to say… i’m touched and quite humbled….... thank you so much…... love and light…...b

  • Keith Reesor

    Keith Reesor

    b….........you weave a spell and mesmerize with words!!
    “stitching dreams
    to comet tails…”
    Magnificent!! :)

  • butchart replied

    keith.. i’m so glad you caught the visuals…. thank you so much for your kind support… i actually thought about you while writing this one….... i hope you are well….... love and light…..b

  • Brad MacDuff

    Brad MacDuff

    Looks like your journal paid off and the dry spell is over. You’ve written a yo-yo of imagery – from a cosmic perspective through the eye of a needle – boundless and tied, all wound in a fraying knot of metaphor. Beautiful words and equally beautiful pictures they paint. Cosmic dance – sounds sublime, and with luck, nothing like a neutron dance.

  • butchart replied

    may have been more my chats with you then perusing the ol journal….. you seem to have a way of making my synapses jump up and take notice…... but regardless… thanks for the kind words my friend.. i feel if i get your stamp of approval then i must be doing something right….... b

  • JaneSolomon

    JaneSolomon

    I’ve read this a few times Butch and the visuals are just fantastic. A soulful, wonderful piece of writing. xxxx

  • butchart replied

    ah jane… thank you so much…. and i’m happy to return the favor as your writing is always a gift to my imagination…....... peace and light…......b

  • Martin Muir

    Martin Muir

    wonderful butch,amazing images your words bring to life in ones mind :)

  • butchart replied

    thanks so much for the kind words martin… just as your images stimulate my own imagination….... peace and light friend….......b

  • liesbeth

    liesbeth

    You allways take me on a journey with your poems..bringing me beautifull visions..if anyone has stars to mark the path it is you.. xx

  • butchart replied

    and you…my dear… are always so willing to take my hand and go….... thank you for that…...... much love to you…...b

  • Solomon Walker

    Solomon Walker

    fantastic piece!

  • butchart replied

    xox

  • AsylumWitch

    AsylumWitch

    This is beautiful Butch. It paints pictures in my mind. Wonderful work.

  • butchart replied

    ah… thank you my friend….. when a wonderful artist with such imaginary images connects with my words ..well….. it makes me feel very good…..... love and light to you…...........b

  • Lisa  Jewell

    Lisa Jewell

    Oh wow
    synchronicity indeed…

    your poetry always seeps deeply into me. xx

  • butchart replied

    the powerr of words truley does amaze me… the connections that are made.. the lines that are drawn… a universal matrix that begins as a thought in one mind.. and stretches out in all directions… capturing all that are willing to be caught…
    thank you for the kind words here..if writing is it’s own reward then touching other souls is a very special bonus…......... love and light…..b

  • ArcadiaTempest

    ArcadiaTempest

    Loved the rhythm of this…..I read it out loud….it was kinda like a dancing with my tongue….hmmm sounds interesting doesn’t ;) .... the tapestry of the cosmos surely was in her/his/it’s dancing groove in this verse me thinks…X

  • butchart replied

    wow.. thanks arcadia… it might sound funny.. but i always read my writing out loud to myself while i’m working on it..to see how it feels spilling off my tongue… ha… so i really appreciate your words here.. and i think i’d love to see your tongue dance sometime… :)

    peace and light…..b

  • Shoaib .

    Shoaib .

    i m with arcadia… this one dances
    awesome words butch
    love it

  • butchart replied

    hey mate… thanks so much for the kind words… glad that this one danced with you…....b

  • hsien-ku

    hsien-ku

    such a vision you have painted – the rhythm of the dance, breath of the cosmos without fear of falling. you have woven magic into the universe my friend. in your words i am granted a glimpse of something immortal. you write like a prophet.

  • butchart replied

    i’m truley humbled by your kind words…. thank you so very much….......b

  • BiographyofRed8

    BiographyofRed8

    you know, I started to sing this poem in my head… what an amazing lyrical piece
    I was dancing along the astral paths (although not tap dancing hahaha)
    you are truely amazing!

  • butchart replied

    happy to make you dance my friend… maybe one day we can trip the light fantastic together…........... thank you….... love and light….....b

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