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wow man you can deliver,awesome words my friend,well done.

moments last for eons
remembering your eyes
how i used to shine there

Now that is a beautful moment :) x

honeysuckle sighs…simply perfect! :-)

Damn, Yeah JenniferB got it right, those words are great, this is a quiet and gentle piece friend, great work!!

Awwww … a true romantic Butch … lovely words with terrific imagery :)

I wanted to quote a particular line, but realized I would quote practically the entire piece. This is so truly beautiful Butch, and I will now read it again and sigh, honeysuckle unlikely though. :)

‘a glimpse of fleeting paradise’ sometimes all we are left to hold onto and remember…. love your writing butch. xx

sigh…..i’m so into this!!

remembering your eyes
how I used to shine there

simply gorgeous.

“when morning kissed our brows
a glimpse of fleeting paradise
is all that time allows”

This is poem is sweet and yet so sad. Time is the cruelest ever, and the ending of this poem is dimmed by it, all I could do was sigh.The emotion, so well conveyed. Magical poem. :)

such a wonderful envisioning this brings!

From the start of this, it draws you in. Fantastic piece. Love it.

Magical always … my friend!!!

beautiful imagery, great words…lovely.

...beautiful butch, totally transported me!

A vivid vision, my Brother: well done!

this is beautiful …. yes

magical, like bells chanting a moment of perfect love.

a moment so delectable and well delivered ~ with me ending on a sigh…feeling the remembering…beautiful butch xx

Oh- amazing. Deliciously concocted, and crafted to bring a tear to the eye and a smile to the heart. :)

Magical!!

b…......Wonderful words…......keeps me coming back for more!! :)

A great write, Butch…...as you say, sometimes it just flows and it is a master who knows when to stop….as you do :))))

Who ever had those experiences with you are lucky to have had them. Quite possibly one of the most sensual thigns I have read from you (and one of my favourites.)

Maybe I can give you a kiss, on a cool prarie with still air and your breath warming my face as it shelters in your arms.

Ahhh … xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

musical picturesque melancholy … thank you for sharing

Oh Butch. You have actually inspired tears from my eyes. Supremely gorgeous. Such evocative descriptions. All I can do now is sigh and love you forever.

from the first line when I began to read this.. it was like I was holding my breath from this line “the quiet gathers
looking for a sound” but as cass said I would have to quote the entire piece, especially love the part where you are looking into his eyes to find yourself there..

whilst on one hand it happens in a blink and we miss so many moments like this because we are blinking or looking the other way, this piece is so visual, tender, beautiful, as the moment goes too quickly.. can i say that this poem speaks to my heart, it is as though you have touched something that perhaps words cannot possibly explain. Just that this has got to be probably the best poem I have read.. since “all that time allows” and thank you for writing it

i hope my comment is many some sense. Just breath-taking, and now I must return to the living, breathing, with a tear on my cheek

Ah, those glimpses :) I love your incisive, spare writing, and your imagery like blades of grass
arch their backs

beautifull.. so very beautifull.. and tender..
“remembering your eyes
how i used to shine there” says so much..

now i read about wonderfull memories.. the pain is not completely gone.. but now you show us the beauty of what was..

Omg – this is so incredibly beautiful that I’m in tears. I’ll say like Liesbeth – those two lines capture that indelible moment but your imagery throughout is poignant and too hauntingly evocative for any compliments to measure up. Thoroughly magnificent writing, dear heart.

oh Mr B… i have missed your wonderful words….. you are a sublime being… much light & love to you…

A glimpse? Only a glimpse…? Of all the beauty and flow and life that was there? There words bring such an ache to my heart my friend… surely we all need more than ‘just a glimpse’?
Peace and light to you… and my love…
K xx

that moment of illumination- the here and now, fully present to the world and in love, if only for a moment- blissful

i loved that image of the quiet gathering looking for sound…
such an important thing to be able to experience the present without fear of future, without remorse for past – and not hanging onto the present, letting it become past without attaching to it. you write beautifully.

very perceptive work, true of life indeed…

you are welcome Butchart…
keep writing my friend, you have a great perceptive mind, just explore it and let it tell you more of what it wants to say to the world, it will amaze you for sure…