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undone: my heart breaks
in that moment truth shines scarlet
i can live through this


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  • Lisa  Jewell
    Lisa Jewellover 2 years ago

    wrenching yet self affirming,
    living through the heart break is doable…xo

  • means a lot coming from such a lovely wordsmith… thankyou ;)

    – burntblue

  • Arcadia Tempest
    Arcadia Tempestover 2 years ago

    The truth shines in the pain and a commitment to the self to move forward …. This captures an immense journey in so few eloquent words X

  • BiographyofRed8
    BiographyofRed8over 2 years ago

    blue, you are so strong, you can live through anything, beautiful words

  • Erika .
    Erika .over 2 years ago

    That last line makes this a strong poem what could have otherwise been a painful poem with no answer…if that makes sense. With so few words you pack in so much emotion.

  • Boadicea
    Boadiceaover 2 years ago

    The spirit of strength and survival and self knowledge shines through this. Very inspirational in the midst of desperation.

  • silvercircles
    silvercirclesover 2 years ago

    Truth shines scarlet Oh, wonderfully powerful words!! You pack so much into such a small poem. Truly a fulfilling read.

  • bellmusker
    bellmuskerover 1 year ago

    Perfect.