A Glorious Dawn

brummieboy
Author: brummieboy
Word Count: 182
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A Glorious Dawn

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A Glorious Dawn

The day dawns with a wondrous glow
As light pours in my mind
I feel the life force flowing deep
As there inside I find
A joy at all of nature’s deeds
Such passion there to see
Bidden by the angels wings
I soar so high to flee
To feel the wind blow softly
And smell such sweet perfume
As roses grow so beautifully
And now begin to bloom
I sense the birds around me
As they glide across the sky
Its azure blue magnificent
Filling up my eyes
I hear the mighty water
As it crashes through the glen
Its crisp and cold demeanour
Sets me awake again
I stand upon a mountain
And see the seven seas
A mighty set of oceans
Between the climbing trees
I breathe all life within me
As the sun begins to rise
And fill my heart with songs
At such a sweet surprise
My life is flowing beautifully
A course so clear and true
So come and sense this glory
And feel the same way too

Phil Sanders
10/1/08

  • Jen Whyte

    Jen Whyte

    Sheer magic Phil … I love this!

  • David Meacham

    David Meacham

    Good work Phil – made me feel happy

  • anaisnais

    anaisnais

    What beautiful pictures you paint with your words. An enchanting write; I look forward to reading you more soon.

  • Julie Langford

    Julie Langfordcommunity host

    Bidden by the angels wings
    I soar so high to flee

    Wow – gave me goosebumps

    Awesome writing Phil

  • Lisa  Jewell

    Lisa Jewell

    Phil, you’ve taken me on a glorious trip…..oh to have wings….

    Beautiful work….

  • C.C. Arshagra

    C.C. Arshagra

    I SHARE .. in all the beauty of your words

  • loramae

    loramae

    Always I feel a warmth from your words so rich and full. I can almost close my eyes and see the beautiful scenes you paint…thank you for sharing with us Phil.

  • Kimberley Gifford

    Kimberley Gifford

    beautiful words…aah so relaxing.

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