Close to You

brummieboy
Author: brummieboy
Word Count: 128
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Close to You

A passionate poem …..

Close to You belongs to the following groups:

EF Welcome Center, Love & Romance and Passions

Caressing your back like a sweet summer breeze
Brushing your lips like whispering trees
Holding your hand like a flower in spring
Feeling your heartbeat like the birds when they sing
Touching your face like a soft wave ashore
Kissing your skin like a wide ocean’s roar
Loving you gently like the bells when they ring
Holding you close like soft gossamer wings
Stroking your hair as the wind rushes by
Lying there with you under blue summer skies
Walking along with your hand held in mine
Just slowly together such heaven .. divine
Spending the night with you under the stars
Walking along sandy beaches afar
Loving you soft like a clear mountain spring
Still with you close like soft gossamer wings

Phil Sanders
04/01/08

  • Deborah Fuller

    Deborah Fuller

    you are really good. you should see if you could right a book.

  • Catherine Veal

    Catherine Veal

    That is so Romantic and touching Phil

  • kseriphyn

    kseriphyn

    Beautiful images I get from this Phil.

  • MDossat

    MDossat

    Very sweet.

  • Aurora Pintore

    Aurora Pintore

    I like this poem

  • Madeline M  Allen

    Madeline M Allen

    How Beautiful Phil !!!

  • Joyce Dickens, IPA

    Joyce Dickens,...

    Wow Phil this is beautiful; so well written and very endearing! Sweet :-)

  • Pat Lucas

    Pat Lucas

    That conjures up lots of lovely pictures in my head. Beautiful.

  • Jen Whyte

    Jen Whyte

    Conjures up amazing pictures in my head too!!

  • moonlight1

    moonlight1

    This is so beautyfull.

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  • hcroft

    hcroft

    Up to your usual standard Phil – you are very talented

  • Julie Langford

    Julie Langfordcommunity host

    Wonderful words Phil – love this

  • Suzanne German

    Suzanne German

    this is truly beautiful phil! well done!

  • Beatriz R. Aldridge

    Beatriz R. Ald...

    Beautiful!

  • Raymond Carle

    Raymond Carle

    quite nice. Quite a high standered of writing you’ve set for yourself

  • Sharon Perrett

    Sharon Perrett

    Wonderful as always Phil, full of passion and love, just I need in this year of change :))

  • anaisnais

    anaisnais

    Another beautiful piece I see, this would make a great verse in a romance card – maybe valentines? Honored to have shared such a piece.

  • Lisa  Jewell

    Lisa Jewell

    I love how you twine nature into your love poems….

    Stunning writing…..

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love and passion