Surreal
Crafting words within my mind
I see visions …. many things
A bird in flight, the dragon’ fire
It helps me to take wing
I fly so high above the clouds
The sights within my soul
As rivers run with waters green
And broken hearts are whole
The melting snow is freezing hard
The sun is cold with fire
I know the emptiness inside
Yet filled with much desire
The melting clock of Dali
Is etched within my brain
I see through darkness clearly
My sanity’s insane
A dream of stillness in the wind
As rain is falling hard
Yet I am dry within the storm
The tempest now retards
A sharpness of the thinking
As fog inside surrounds
Such moments have such clarity
As silence makes the sounds
Phil Sanders
18/12/07
John Cole
These works of yours are so great that I wonder have you had them printed in book form yet Phil
gordontant
I like this a lot Phil, excellent
Deborah Fuller
awesome work.
PhotogeniquE IPA
you not only have inner vision, but the ability to express that inner vision in words. wonderful
Joyce Dickens,...
Beautifuly written Phil…..what an amazing gift!
loramae
Your words give surreal an expressive meaning…brings sadness, brings gladness…something I will want and maybe need to read again…
Sharon Perrett
Wow amazing words Phil :)) they say so much….
MissKristy
Ohh..this is a fav. Just so damn well written.
David Haviland
Superb piece of writing.
John Segon-Fis...
Beautifully written Phil – I love the way you have used contradictions.
Cheri Perry
Amazing words…good job.