First Thoughts

brummieboy
Author: brummieboy
Word Count: 136
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First Thoughts

And slowly I wake
My mind opens wide
A smile spreads across me
You’re there by my side
A morning delight
As I lean and I see
That your beautiful body
Is still close to me
I remember the evening
Our laughter and fun
As we talked and we kissed
Until the end of the sun
That short dainty walk
As you led me to bed
No words were exchanged
Nothing more to be said
And we entered a world
That only we share
As the night now surrounds us
Our loving is there
Such passion was found
In each other’s caress
And the joy of our love
Was simply the best
And so at the dawn
I lean and I say
Welcome my darling
To a wonderful day

Phil Sanders
22/11/07

First Thoughts

  • LisaG

    LisaG, 10 months ago

    That is so beautiful….....

    And what a day that would be…..

  • clau

    clau, 10 months ago

    hmmmmmmmmm….wonderful day too!...:)))

  • Sharon Perrett

    Sharon Perrett, 10 months ago

    Soooooo beautiful, wouldn’t that be lovely, a wonderful day ;))) gorgeous passionate words Phil so loving, sighhhhh , now why can’t that happen in real life

  • loramae

    loramae, 10 months ago

    These words knock on melancholy’s door…so so sweet…

  • PhotogeniquE IPA

    PhotogeniquE IPA, 10 months ago

    just how it should be!!

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morning, love, emotion and passion