The First Meeting

brummieboy
Author: brummieboy
Word Count: 138
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The First Meeting

The First Meeting belongs to the following groups:

EF Welcome Center and Love & Romance

The First Meeting

Windows of opportunity push ajar
And my life is changed once more
I see all the mountains of needs close by
The rivers of desire at the door
The billowing clouds of the past start to part
And the sun of release is at hand
My heart wakes again to comfort and love
As before me I see that you stand
Let the orchestra play such a symphony
And the notes of your voice flow so sweet
To reach for your arms as the moment is here
When at last we finally meet
And the fire on our lips at that first tender kiss
That sends raging passion aflame
And I shout from the rooftops of joy and sweet love
As at I last I can call out your name

Phil Sanders
19/11/07

  • Lisa  Jewell

    Lisa Jewell

    This is so beautiful, I’m moved to tears….........

    Stunning poem…..

  • Margot Kiesskalt

    Margot Kiesskalt

    Such a magnificent and touching poem.

  • Sharon Perrett

    Sharon Perrett

    Nice poem Phil

  • PhotogeniquE IPA

    PhotogeniquE IPA

    glorious weaving of words

  • Jen Whyte

    Jen Whyte

    So beautiful, you made me cry ….

  • loramae

    loramae

    Well Mr Passionate…tell us more!...What can I say…scintillating!

  • MissKristy

    MissKristy

    This feels like where I am at right now..it’s an exquisite feeling.

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