Gettysburg

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Author: brummieboy
Word Count: 86
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Gettysburg

They lose the wide eyed innocence
As sharp the cannon’s roar
And bloody conflagration
Is placed at nature’s door
The lofty flags of battle
Are ripped to shreds and torn
As youth and all its hopes
Are buried there stillborn
The “glory” that is war
Is shown a fallacy
Whilst men and weapons shriek
As lives no longer be
And when the battle’s over
And the smoke pervades the air
The bodies piled up needlessly
Should make us more aware

Phil Sanders
14/11/07

Gettysburg

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  • SkyFox

    SkyFox, 9 months ago

    You are a very talented man. I would love to share time with you in the real world but this is nice too! If you ever make it to my side of town, we MUST unite!

  • BKvonBernhard

    BKvonBernhard, 9 months ago

    Superb Sir Phil.

  • Susan Zohn

    Susan Zohn, 9 months ago

    very good Phil. You are very talented my friend.

  • Jen Whyte

    Jen Whyte, 9 months ago

    If only everybody in the world thought like this!!!

  • PhotogeniquE IPA

    PhotogeniquE IPA, 9 months ago

    hey – ‘conflagration’ again!!

    Very real and thoughtful words, matching cvdad’s picture perfectly

  • John Segon-Fisher,  RPA

    John Segon-Fis..., 9 months ago

    Profoundly stated Phil – Nothing more terrifying than being shot at and seeing your friends “shredded”!

  • LisaG

    LisaG, 9 months ago

    Powerful writing, Phil….

  • loramae

    loramae, 9 months ago

    Oh WoW!...most gripping write!

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