The Vision of Beauty
The day begins with gentle thoughts
As you come in my mind
I see the beauty in your face
Each day there’s more I find
For you are gentleness and joy
A vision to behold
I doubt I’ll see more loveliness
Even when I’m old
A ray of light encompass you
Such dreams it does invoke
I look into those dreamy eyes
Your beauty up I soak
For you have woken up my heart
And fired the passion deep
I think about you in the day
And when I go to sleep
Your hair is soft and shining
I see your body chic
A day is never long enough
Nor even one long week
For you have timeless beauty
I want to watch so long
A year is just a starting point
You set my heart in song
So thank you pretty lady
For all the fire that burns
I want to kiss those lovely lips
And always for them yearn
Phil Sanders
30/10/07
Avery Etherine
fantastic, i could never write a RHYMING poem so well, theyre really hard to do when you think about it
Globalphotos
Phil that is so beautiful, congrats :)
Sharon Perrett
WOW beautiful words and lucky lady to have imspired such emotional thoughts.
loramae
Omagootness Brummy!...need I say more?..lol
dreadfulbride
my Mrs is always on my a… about writing one about her, I keep telling her that, the muse doesn’t cooperate well whilst a monkey rides… guess I’ll have to …. I don’t know…something…anyway.:)
well written Brummieboy.
Jen Whyte
Phil, I think you have excelled yourself – that is just beautiful
PhotogeniquE IPA
beautiful, heart-felt words
MissKristy
Mmm…that makes me melt. Just gorgeous, Phil :)
vinee
Fabulous writting and very warm.