Autumn
My grandmother liked writing poetry and had a great poem called “Spring”. I wrote this for her as part of the Four Seasons and included her original poem.
Winter’s on it’s way,
The Autumn breeze beckons surrender,
Summer leaves,
Detach from trees,
So falls each leaf,
In golden splendour.
Rheenie
Wow like really wow I like it great job
Morgan MacLaren replied
Thank you Rheenie!
Rheenie
Where are the other ones I wanna read em
Morgan MacLaren
Well I am a songwriter and I always write WAY too many lyrics and not enough music. So anything that doesn’t find a home inside a song will end up here! So there will be more soon! :-)
Rheenie
But but cant you put the songs on to tugs at shirt and pleades
Morgan MacLaren
See my profile…
Pilgrim
What a beatiful, succinctly capture piece. Not a single word too many or too few. Sculptured writing.
Morgan MacLaren
Thank you Pilgrim. This was inspired by Sam Hunt’s style of poetry if you can believe that!
catruth
Nice.
NoMessMan
I really like this piece.
Keep up the good work.
Morgan MacLaren
Thanks NoMessMan. I think I need to write faster to catch up to you. :-)
oddpoet
this is a great little poem well written and a beautful imagery
rajamis
beautiful, it makes me miss the seasons even more…
Morgan MacLaren replied
Yeah, I am looking forward to the next Autumn. I love the change of seasons.