A Tear

bribiedamo
Author: bribiedamo
Word Count: 37
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A tear forms
it rolls
down my cheek
It tumbles to my lips
a salty embrace
Somehow sweet
Somehow bitter

Embracing the past
Clouding the future

A bitter sweet tonic
Swallow the past
and embrace the future

A Tear

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  • flower68

    flower68, 3 months ago

    Oh how sad :-(
    swallow the past embrace the future.Yep,that’s the key.xo

  • loramae

    loramae, 3 months ago

    “Swallow the past embrace the future”...You should do this more often… pen emotions..they are quite moving! ;)

  • bribiedamo

    bribiedamo in reply to loramae’s comment, 3 months ago

    tx Loramae….........yes…....and take my own advice wud be good…..I actually wrote this after 1 single tear came out whilst thinking of my ex….......and it startled me…......bothered me….....cheers my friend

  • loramae

    loramae, 3 months ago

    Damo…I was actually thinking about what you wrote as I was milling about the house today and felt kind of bad in what I didn’t say to you in my comment…I know one doesn’t write like that for the flip of of it. It comes from a hardearned emotion…so consider yourself hugged :O) And I won’t be the one to say shoulda coulda woulda….But the words DID come from my friend Damo’s pen :)

  • Care

    Care, 3 months ago

    ...oh…how beautiful….can never full let go of the past…but let it help you in the future…both are eternally connected : )

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