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I walked tonight; upon streets that haven’t seen the soles of my feet for more than a decade. There’s something about putting one foot in front of the other, a simple act, a balancing act, a controlled fall between points. The pavement was glossy from fresh rain and the sky a polished sheet of glass.

Stars glowed and my breath plumed. It was a night for walking. A night to move. A night to feel alive through the simple act of falling between points.

I saw a shooting star – a seam in the sky, closed as soon as it appeared. I remembered a falling star from the same decade before; one so close that I could see smoke from its tail and hear the roar of its flame.

The star tonight was distant, and no star at all… just a rock in the sky… a rock turned memory and smoke.


Brad MacDuff

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  • bellmusker
    bellmuskerabout 1 year ago

    This is so very visual, Brad; beautifully drawn. And the very first line started my brain ticking over – why is it the first time in a decade? What has happened? Such a gorgeous piece of writing.

  • Plum
    Plumabout 1 year ago

    Wonderful writing – very atmospheric :>

  • uncleblack
    uncleblackabout 1 year ago

    i really liked this.it is a good feeling, the simple things.memories.moving on.

  • davvi
    davviabout 1 year ago

    well done,Brad.I love this kind of writing.

  • jacqleen
    jacqleenabout 1 year ago

    Love the pase here…its quiet, peaceful and steady…but with no fear, no regrets…just reflecting and seeing AGAIN :)

  • Amy Levos
    Amy Levosabout 1 year ago

    Lovely. <3

  • abigcat
    abigcatabout 1 year ago

    What has happened in the decade? Not nosy, just interested. A very powerful opening line :-))

  • Rikki Woods
    Rikki Woodsabout 1 year ago

    Beautiful introspective piece. Very vivid and smooth.

  • shootback
    shootbackabout 1 year ago

    A really intriguing, nice writing—excellent!:)

  • anthruslsmystic
    anthruslsmysticabout 1 year ago

    Beautiful, memory and smoke… isnt it fun to be ethereal like that.