I walked tonight; upon streets that haven’t seen the soles of my feet for more than a decade. There’s something about putting one foot in front of the other, a simple act, a balancing act, a controlled fall between points. The pavement was glossy from fresh rain and the sky a polished sheet of glass.
Stars glowed and my breath plumed. It was a night for walking. A night to move. A night to feel alive through the simple act of falling between points.
I saw a shooting star – a seam in the sky, closed as soon as it appeared. I remembered a falling star from the same decade before; one so close that I could see smoke from its tail and hear the roar of its flame.
The star tonight was distant, and no star at all… just a rock in the sky… a rock turned memory and smoke.
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This is so very visual, Brad; beautifully drawn. And the very first line started my brain ticking over – why is it the first time in a decade? What has happened? Such a gorgeous piece of writing.
Wonderful writing – very atmospheric :>
i really liked this.it is a good feeling, the simple things.memories.moving on.
well done,Brad.I love this kind of writing.
Love the pase here…its quiet, peaceful and steady…but with no fear, no regrets…just reflecting and seeing AGAIN :)
Lovely. <3
What has happened in the decade? Not nosy, just interested. A very powerful opening line :-))
Beautiful introspective piece. Very vivid and smooth.
A really intriguing, nice writing—excellent!:)
Beautiful, memory and smoke… isnt it fun to be ethereal like that.